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Anonymous
10/1/23, 10:15 PM
I really hope Jafar is successful in ensnaring Aladdin
Oct 1, 2023
Whitey
10/1/23, 8:58 PM
Wow! Great story! Hope you continue and debase and humiliate him in his "uniform."
10/1/23, 8:20 PM
Just reread this, and there's so much to like here, starting with getting to know Onyx - some of his backstory, how he thinks and his motivations, what he can do, and how he works. Then there's our fist look at Daybreaker, and what a world beater he'll be for Master. Wow! So much more powerful than Jamie/Kid Rocket. I can't wait to see Jamie find or figure out it was him, and how much temptation that will be for him. What will finally tip him over the edge and into Master's warm latex embrace? And how will it come about? To top it off, we see the beginning of Luxor's downfall take shape. I really want to see what Master's "subtlest Brute" and "fun little experiment" can do with and to him. There's so much to look forward to in this story.
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 6:45 PM
Me encantaría leer más me gusta esto
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 6:00 PM
Hot idea, very well done. Would love to read more either of this or like this
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 2:51 PM
Need more!!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 2:46 PM
Alpha man huh..
9/28/23, 8:35 AM
No se como terminé leyendo esta historia, y como sea encuentro el modo de leer cada nuevo capítulo, espero no pares de escribir 🥂🔥

10/1/23, 12:08 AM
@[Splat Player](/user/show/10027939) Hola, voy a estar actualizando una vez por semana, aproximadamente. en Wattpad lo tengo un par de capitulos avanzados, pero las ideas se arremolinan, a veces pienso demasiado a futuro y me frustro con lo atrasado que voy :P y no te preocupes, hay mucho que quiero escribir de esta historia :P
9/30/23, 5:23 PM
adding onto what Marik said, my own personal theory is that this Daybreaker is a combined conscience of both Jamie and the symbiote, a lot like Dusk! though it might be temporary since the League will get suspicious. . . that said I cant wait for Luxor to become enrobed and drenched in shiny latex :333

9/30/23, 5:29 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) and additionally, I think that it is interesting how Dusk is shown using verbs like "smirked, cruel smile, husky," while we see Daybreaker with "grin, dopey," etc., I really appreciate the balance of light and dark between the Superdrone and the Superdrone-to-be!
Sep 29, 2023
9/30/23, 4:23 PM
Okay, this **_(definitely)_** needs continuations