Recent Comments

Martin
10/5/23, 7:06 PM
The links to your images are broken, it would be better to upload them to our site (the image dialog allows to upload images, too). Also, your story would read much easier if you'd add more paragraph breaks. Usually, a new paragraph is started each time another person starts to speak. But nevertheless, your story is really hot!
Gingcub
10/5/23, 5:05 PM
Love this story! Hoping our hero becomes a total bating addict with a little nub and huge balls :)
10/5/23, 11:41 AM
ANY UPDATE? MY FAVORITE in a While
Anonymous
10/4/23, 8:20 AM
it would have been hot if Thor started to lick and rim herc's pussy while Hercules was sitting on his face.

10/4/23, 12:59 PM
@Anonymous He probably did some of that accidentally while struggling and 'mmmphing' under that ass.
10/3/23, 2:18 PM
Sexy hot

10/4/23, 12:58 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you!
Anonymous
10/4/23, 8:09 AM
hot!! but I hope that there's gonna be sex. I'd luv to see herc sucking dick and begging to get his pussy stuffed. :)

10/4/23, 12:56 PM
@Anonymous There will definitely be sexual elements, but be forewarned this is a story written by two asexual spankos so we tend to veer more towards "homoerotic" than full-on "homo". Put another way, the spanking IS the sex.
10/4/23, 4:52 AM
I already adored this series but to see it receive the love of a re-edit to tighten the links to what happens in the future. To better introduce the reader to the characters and the world. Wonderful. Who knew I could enjoy it any more!? Love your work. I am excited to see the refinement of the story through the chapters as you go, as well as looking forward to new additions in the end to find out where Jasper and co end up.
10/3/23, 5:14 PM
Clearly, Apex Gym is heavily under Master's influence. So I have to wonder whether everybody there is either under his influence or targeted to be. Or are there ordinary people there too, who just decided it would be a convenient place to workout, or a good deal?

10/4/23, 2:46 AM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) perhaps both! i think that gyms with very athletic men would be prime recruiting and hunting grounds for Master to get more drones!
10/3/23, 4:05 AM
Really enjoying this series so far! Hoping there will be more for me to enjoy during locktober ;)

10/4/23, 12:10 AM
@[BlondieBoy](/user/show/2505879) Haha. Thanks. Iā€™m not sure how I feel about locks, but I have more ideas. I have to focus on work right now, but I hope to get something out next Monday.

Anonymous
10/4/23, 12:24 AM
@[Kotei](/user/show/10027925) I just meant for me to enjoy while I'm locked. Do what you will with your story! :)
10/3/23, 7:13 PM
That was a fantastic chapter. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ I can't wait to read the next one but no pressure to finish fast. Your writing was so good here šŸ‘