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10/15/23, 12:27 PM
Oh Gosh , another great chapter ! I love how Sammy take the upper hand over his brothers. Can’t wait to see the whole John’s fall🔥
10/15/23, 10:58 AM
Oh my gosh that is another hit.
Leo
10/15/23, 2:58 AM
Thank you so much for continuing this hot story!! Truly one of my favorites on this site. I’m so happy that Dexter has another obedient daddy slave to play with! Please, make the coach divorce his wife and end his miserable marriage. Now that he is madly in love with Dexter, he should propose and have a wedding with his master. Dexter will now own everything that belongs to the coach, his house, car, bank account, etc. I hope you can include this in the next chapter. It would be so sexy!

10/15/23, 3:54 AM
@[Leo](/user/show/988646) Hi. Thanks for the comment. Dexter is 16 years old at this point in the story (and who knows if we'll go beyond that) so there will be no marriage or any legal transfer of assets. Since his slaves are part of his property, he effectively owns anything they own.

Anonymous
10/15/23, 4:56 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Well since Dexter can’t, i think it would be hot if he did make two of his slaves marry each over, like in a twisted power fetish way, like the coach and daddy jimmy, or coach and daddy bruce or even brad and daddy jimmy….
10/15/23, 1:33 AM
Once again a chapter that hits SO many of my buttons! thank you for continuing to update this story, it never fails to improve my day! I cannot wait to read the next parts, I'm interested in how you intend to deal with the genie.
Anonymous
10/15/23, 1:27 AM
Rocco did not deserve what happened to him. 😈 What's going to happen to the unk next?
10/15/23, 12:47 AM
I love all the Eden and Sammy/Johnny/Eli stories. So hot. Another great chapter. Looks like Sammy may have been making use of that large endowment of his earlier than his brothers. Can't wait for more.
10/14/23, 11:44 PM
Creo que ya entendí lo que harán jaja xd
Anonymous
10/14/23, 11:12 PM
Nice chap! Want to see more about the gay club and Prong 3 and 4! The Chevy men under control!
Anonymous
10/14/23, 8:17 PM
doug alway scout the sexiest muescle men
Bucky
10/14/23, 9:47 AM
Hello Manicorn!! I recognized your profile picture from Bluesky and decided I should check out your story! Since it's obvious you have a really good grasp of the Mind Control and Kink aspects of the story, I decided my approach would be to review it like any other fan fiction so here are my thoughts: While I don't know Hercules quite as well in Marvel Comics context, I did think you got his character down very well. Now there WAS a recent example of him crying at the death of his family in Avengers No Way Home issue #8 (2019), but I don't think many people read that series so I don't think anyone would blame you for missing that. Also he was having his emotions fucked with or something. It's not a great book. Alternatively, your story probably isn't 616 canon and may even take place before those events. Either way I think you did a great job with this first chapter and I'm excited to read what else you have! Excited to see your take on the X-Men! Bucky

10/14/23, 8:08 PM
@Bucky Hey, thanks so much for checking out my stuff! It means a lot you follow me on multiple sites. And I loved receiving a review just for how in-character a kink fic like this is. In regards to Hercules, he meant brought to tears through corporal punishment, not through genuine grief or emotion. And you're correct this isn't strictly 616, though it takes more cues from that 'verse than anywhere else. Rather, it's a universe me and my boyfriend created that just happens to include the sexiest parts of any Marvel adaptation we like, so it's kinda a mish-mosh. But that way, any disparity can easily be hand waved if they bother you. If you like the X-Men I think you'll enjoy several chapters down the line that focus on them. One just went up today!