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10/18/23, 12:29 AM
What a great take-down of the coach. Dexter getting the coach to beg was a fun twist. I will look forward to what happens to the coach next. Meanwhile, the statue-mode treatment of Cody was really well-done! I could practically feel the transformation happening.
10/18/23, 12:22 AM
Bravo. Of course it's a great story, as is all your work. Those of us who are your fans sort of know that black rubber is going to take over. But one of your wonderful attributes is that one never quite knows how is it going to happen. More importantly, this story has something different - that being assimilated into the rubber network is a good and glorious thing. And like your, this reader (and I assume others) want to join that glorious unity. Despite the hundreds of stories on this site, I find very few have a satisfying ending. What you have achieved in this story is the antidote to that: You acknowledge that your readers and you (as well as the readers among each other) achieve a "communion" with each other when we read your stories. So not everyone one of us may be in black rubber, but perhaps that you have been able to take us on your journey (which is your own form of mind control) might result in a more satisfying feeling. Again: Bravo!
Anonymous
10/17/23, 10:13 PM
What happens to the men when connected to the hive-mind , can they contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind ?

10/17/23, 11:21 PM
@Anonymous You asked whether “they can contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind?” My answer is sorta no. The reason being is there’s not really any need to contact each other. This is because they are of one mind. They are each other. There is a constant, and never-ending flow of communication between any man that has been connected. I'm not sure if anyone noticed but once the men "connect" they no longer speak using sounds. I wanted to write a story in which there is no communication from the converted or assimilated. That way, there would be no monologuing on what the grand scheme was. In fact, I had the scientists go over several cliched possibilities. But we really don't know what their endgame is. But the title of this chapter is "Communion". Communion is defined as “the sharing or exchanging of intimate thoughts and feelings, especially when the exchange is on a mental or spiritual level.” So imagine if your mind and soul are constantly sharing. Everyone else’s mind and spirit is moving in and out of you … through you. So it’s not really contacting; they’re already forever part of you. And all of that is being broadcast out like a beacon, luring more and more men towards the tower. I hope that makes sense.
10/17/23, 9:47 PM
Great ending! I also loved the earlier scene with all the men pointing in the direction of the beacon when asked where "home" is--properly eerie!

10/17/23, 9:57 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks, Hypnothrill. I really hoped that this would be a worthy ending. My idea is that the steps basically repeat at this point. As the area around the tower grows, the broadcast or the transmission also increases in range and potency. And more and more men begin the steps towards communion. And by communion, I meant both that men are unified in a community, and also a somewhat religious experience as they sorta worship the tower. It's weird though that you mention the pointing scene. I hadn't actually planned that scene. I was writing the scene with the doctor talking to the general, and just figured that he would present some kind of scientific experiment. And that just sorta fell out of my head. And as I wrote it, I thought: this is creepy! Men all pointing in a singular direction, and not really being aware or why they're pointing. I wonder if I subconsciously got it from Close Encounters of the Third Kind. I wasn't actively thinking of that movie, but I do remember the scene in which all the men point towards the sky. Maybe that's what inspired me ... it's hard to say. But I just typed it out without really planning it. Sorry if I'm going off on a tangent. But when I first wrote that scene, the men were in the cafeteria, and the women in the gymnasium. And after quickly writing it, and thinking about it, I reversed the locations. I thought it would be appropriate to place the men in the gymnasium. After all, the words origin is Greek for a place that men exercise in the nude. So I thought it would be better to place the men in the gym. So it just shows that I really didn't plan that scene out. And if a writer ever feels the muse, it's best to just write it out and see where your random thoughts take you.
10/17/23, 8:33 PM
Very hot. Love to see the internal conflict and how Dr. Altman's power is working with it. Here's hoping Jayson finds a new life as an out and proud gay athlete.
10/17/23, 8:27 PM
Fun story, but one thing that trips me up is the bathroom question section. Servwnts are told them may ask to use the bathroom, and then are punished when doing so... maybe if wording was reworked it would make it seem more like a trap rather than confusing permissions. Regardless, a small detail in an otherwise great story so far
10/17/23, 2:52 PM
Can i order him😈😈😈🔥🔥
10/15/23, 10:41 PM
The story is certainly funny but at the same time stupid. Professor X can easily return everyone back to normal, Jean Gray can also do this easily, Emma Frost and many other characters. In the world of comics, mind control or the like of this ability is not a powerful force over which there is no control.

10/16/23, 3:15 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thank you for your comment. If Professor X, Jean Grey, or Emma Frost existed in this universe it would make perfect sense for the heroes to go to them first. Since they don't, they have fewer options. Other readers have come to the conclusion this story does not take place in the 616 universe, which is correct. Also, if you've read stories with The Purple Man you'll know it's not so easy to resist his control. The Handler is partially based on him. Anyway, please don't leave comments on people's stories saying they're "stupid" in the future. It's pretty rude! If you don't like it, don't read it.

10/16/23, 9:57 AM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) Then you should have indicated that it takes place in an alternate universe and that some important characters are missing from your story. When you write a story, you must be prepared for any criticism, no matter what it may be. I’m going to write a story myself (unfortunately I don’t have time yet) But I already have a concept and a plot (and I’m ready for any criticism, no matter how harsh it is) Because in this way I can improve something in my stories in the future.

10/16/23, 1:15 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) No, I must not be prepared for "any" criticism because there are constructive and nonconstructive ways to leave comments. Yours was nonconstructive. The proper thing to do when an author asks you not to leave such comments is to simply apologize and try not to do it again. The fact you instead went on the offensive tells me you're not a person worth talking to further. Also, be aware of the type of story you're commenting on. This is a hypno-spanking kink story posted on a hypno fetish website. Would any of the characters you named be welcome in this kind of story? Would you want them to simply "fix" the hypnosis and undo the villain's work? Would that make the story hotter, or more fun?

10/16/23, 4:30 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Please get off your high horse good sir. Not everyone is here to brush up their doctorate in english. While its okay to give criticism, you could have worded it abit kinder. And you could say you are under no obligation to mince your words for the author, while i dont speak for the author, i think he isnt really looking for your criticism, nor does he care for it either. And as Manicorn pointed out above, its a sexy story about heroes getting spanked. Why are you thinking so hard into it? Just enjoy the story, or dont read it if you dont enjoy these kinds of kinks Have a good day.

10/16/23, 4:46 PM
@[Manicorn](/user/show/10041123) In fact, you are wrong and my criticism is quite constructive, you just don’t like the criticism and for some reason you are offended by it. Anyone can publish their opinion that they want. You yourself did not indicate that the story is an alternative to the Marvel universe (you made a mistake ) I pointed this out. You yourself said that there is no Charles Xavier, Jean Gray, etc. in this universe? Then who brought the mutants together and united them at school? Therefore, it looks ridiculous (that you have plot holes in your story) I just pointed out this (and for some reason you were offended and immediately got personal). Of course, I’m not going to argue with you further and prove something if you don’t see the truth You are already an adult and I am not going to convince you.

10/16/23, 4:55 PM
@[Moose](/user/show/908031) Where is it more gentle to criticize? In my opinion, I wrote everything quite gently about the story. I didn’t write anything very bad about the story and the author himself. I just pointed out that there are plot holes that need to be closed. I am for the truth and truth, I will not apologize to the author (like him he himself suggested to me). If he doesn’t like what I wrote, let him ignore me. And yes, sorry for the English (you see, this is not my native language) so there may be errors in the text. I think you should have understood this by reading what I wrote (I hope you didn’t consider me illiterate because of this) ​

Martin
10/16/23, 8:51 PM
Ok guys, I think you've all exchanged your point of view by now. Anything else will just be personal, and that's just not necessary. For what it's worth I can see both Zander's point as well as why Manicorn was offended by his way of wording it. Now just everyone be cool and enjoy what Manicorn has written! Have fun and keep spilling protein :)
10/16/23, 5:22 PM
I for one rather enjoyed this story. I will confess, I couldn't wait for the installations and went ahead and read them all from your lined profile. I have a personal fondness for Gambit I might add, so I particularly enjoyed this chapter and the next few to follow.

10/16/23, 6:40 PM
@[Napalm](/user/show/908052) Thank you! Me and my boyfriend maintained a chart as we went and we were actually surprised at how many spankings Gambit got involved in, lol. He isn't either of our particular favorites, but he's definitely fun as a "roguish" type.
10/16/23, 3:50 PM
I appreciate every author that sits down and invests the time to write and to seek out an audience by publishing no matter the format or genre; kudos to them all. Having acknowledged everyone let me focus on the one that is the master of this genre, namely you. You write so well. The stories you weave capture the essence of submission as well as the essence of responsible domination while staying clear of BDSM cliches. Thank you and I hope you keep writing. This story is aces.