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11/22/23, 2:23 PM
I love this story soo much... Im even falling a little in littlespace while I'm reading this
Andy D
11/22/23, 1:08 PM
I love this chapter
Tom
11/15/23, 10:02 PM
Wow so fucking hot! I hope you continue with this story!

11/16/23, 2:57 AM
@[Tom](/user/show/1813716) Thank you! My plan was for this series to be an anthology actually—so the next story would be a different guy and a different creature on the other side of the portal. But I may return to Justin!

Tom
11/16/23, 8:36 AM
@[FtMA692](/user/show/10043380) Thanks for the reply. I will continue to read this series. Thanks for your contribution!

11/22/23, 12:58 PM
@[FtMA692](/user/show/10043380) Looking forward to seeing what other creatures are waiting beyond the rift for naughty guys, particularly those of the tentacled variety!
Andy D
11/22/23, 12:14 PM
Wow I really enjoyed reading ☺️
11/21/23, 11:05 AM
I really enjoyed the series of dates that were all a test. Creativity levels off the charts, the world is so vivid and detailed. And the plot thickens! I have to read this story slowly, I don't want to catch up and have to wait! A himbo, but smart! A brave new world indeed :laughing:

11/22/23, 12:14 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thanks. I thought that the test format was kind of fun. I actually wanted to more obviously format the decisions like they were inputs but I thought creating text boxes or something like that would be a little bit overkill.
Anonymous
11/21/23, 2:12 PM
My vote would be Orcs
Aug 14, 2022
Ggg
11/20/23, 10:22 PM
I've never left a comment or even read the whole thing before but this is a masterpiece man. This is surprisingly well written and I laughed my ass out reading the whole thing. Kudos
11/20/23, 6:39 PM
Just as a warning, Kenny ([my mental picture here](https://imgur.com/a/VNcKfLc)) is pretty incidental to the remainder of Jayson's story. Kenny might get his own spin-off chapter at some point, but if you are expecting to read about the seduction of a cute redhead next chapter, you will be disappointed. There are other people for Jayson to seduce instead.
11/20/23, 2:14 PM
People I hope Ben wins for: Logan, Tyler People I hope Ben Loses for: Todd, Chad, Jacob, Lucas, Caleb, Travis I went with the assumption that these are mind controllers so they would win as much as possible, and I went with 6 orgasms. Less if fine, but more doesn't seem fair. Anyway I chose to save Logan and Tyler because they seem like the biggest jerks. Logan is the person who I want to outright outwit the beholders and I hope that he is in the middle of the story. My personal scene idea is that the intelligent fantasy race tried to subdue him and socially pressure him into their clutches but he has none of it and shows them who is boss and instills fear into those that wished to dominate him. I'd make him the 5th person in the story to keep pace after the first winner and to give hope to the last 3 contestants. Who will fail Todd I'm hoping to suffer tremendously and have that personality beaten out of him so I'm giving him the orcs who aren't just immune to his charms but cruel to the bubbly boy as they gape him without his pleasure. Considering the extremity of his fate I'd put him in the later of the story and I think I'll make him 6th Chad I think scales down well and I'd make him drown in ooze. Not death obviously, but I'd make sure his muscles don't work in the ooze, the thing he is happiest about, and they'd just turn him into a cum factory. I'd make Chad the very 1st person Ben loses for since he'd have such high morale with everyone else and losing him early on makes things feel that much more hopeless. Jacob should be subject to the mindflayers. They would probe him and probe him and for his trusting nature, his mind created team would betray him and it would end up with him betrayed and gangbanged. The mindflayers then ask him after a lot of abuse if he is willing to be a slave to people who don't care for him if it means being spared the horrors of his trust constantly violated. On the outside, he'd be an eager trophy slave, inside his head he'd come to resist the actions of the mindflayers with a body that can feel but can't respond to his will. I'd put him as the 8th person of the story since he ties so well with Ben's circumstance. Tyler was my last survivor and I'd make him a hold out. The reason I think he should win other than my primary reason of him being a jerk is that he is too unremarkable to orgasm to. So I'd also pair him with the mimics since out of everyone on the list I think mimics are the things people are least sexually interested in. His reserved nature makes him wise to the chests and they get tired of waiting when his fears are confirmed. They eat him, put him through tentacle hell, but he is very unresponsive because this is all too much for him and he correctly guessed the trap. I'd put him as the 3rd person in the story. Lucas's bisexuality isn't something I'd play with, but if I were to do it, I'd give him a centaur. They'd have feminine faces, smooth bodies without breasts and hairy everything else other than a cock. I'd make the centaurs play with Lucas like a cat plays with a lizard. They'd outrun him, injure him slightly, do it again, this time forcing him to have a small insertion, and on and on he'd escape until he'd have no energy left and the centaur can fuck him hard. He'd say they were arousing before they attack him and then he'd hate the thought of sex forever despite being a cockslave. I think hammering home that the only bisexual hated sex puts everything into place so I'd make him the 2nd person in the story. Caleb seems perfect for the goblins. The harmless tendency to flirt with other guys would be well served here. Or rather the lack of its presence. The biggest actual socialite deserves the biggest crowd and his high energy should be good enough to keep up with demands. Considering this is a gang bang scene I'd say it has a strong orgasm potential by Ben so I'd make it 7th because he'd be tired. I'd have nature dominate Travis, so I'd give him the direwolves. Using that love of nature and turning it into his worst fear. I'd also involve property marking in the form of the penetration and orgasm and then also pissplay. He'd be 4th on the list. Actually, come to think of it, Ben winning Logan's challenge wouldn't work very well since I made him actually get out ahead. So, I'd give it to someone else I guess. Anyway, that's just my suggestions.
11/20/23, 5:36 AM
Where is the next part?