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nycboot
5/31/20, 12:05 PM
Thanks for this story! I first read the uncensored version and then this version, and I like this version significantly more. I find all the violence and gore a distraction from the narrative. Although violence for its own sake is not my thing, I can definitely understand how it can be a turn on. As I commented at the end of chapter 1, I love the idea of a guy discovering he's a demon and trying to wrestle and understand himself and his urges. But then that aspect of the story gets replaced by a demon trying but unable to satisfy himself - it's like it starts one way and then morphs into another story. In other words, it seems like two different stories spliced together. Your uncensored version has a kind of repeating ending (much more than here) which was very atmospherically haunting, reminding me of the 1946 film "Dead of Night." I suppose you wanted to leave the reader in a mood like Hugh, always wanting more but never achieving it. I wonder if you might consider creating a different Hugh story where it's established from the outset that he's a twisted demon, but then tries to search for more and actually finds it. (Personally I would like to play around with the notion of a guy discovering and coming to grips with being a demon - I think that's probably too tame for your taste.) Again thanks for this story - I won't say it's my favorite, but it really makes a strong impression and sticks in the mind.
5/31/20, 11:56 AM
I Love This, Thank You
M.
5/31/20, 3:27 AM
Holy FUCK! That was such a hot chapter. Many thanks!
5/30/20, 11:02 PM
Really enjoying this story. Great work :)
5/30/20, 5:28 PM
Let me know what you're interested in having Thor & Lan get up to! :)
Anonymous
5/29/20, 3:06 PM
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5/27/20, 10:24 PM
it was amazing. you should continue it. it's a hot story.
Anonymous
5/27/20, 7:40 PM
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Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
5/27/20, 6:04 PM
I wish I could find somebody like this to blackmail me, lucky kid.
5/27/20, 5:10 PM
this is my favorite story in a long time..thank you