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theozus
2/1/20, 6:39 PM
Dude, you legit made me too sad to cum, which I think is a testament to how effective and inventive your writing is. Seriously excited to see what comes next!
Anonymous
2/1/20, 4:28 PM
i love the idea, but i somehow hope that this alex guy eventually ends up loving to be public naked and turns his life around for naked man with the guy he is playing against
Anonymous
1/31/20, 11:01 PM
I really hope there's a backup of his mind stored somewhere. alternatively, having Alec find a note explaining everything when it's too late would make this feel like a kinky episode of the Twilight Zone or possibly Black Mirror.
firesix
1/31/20, 10:49 PM
Fuuuuuck. This is incredible. Your writing style and word choice is absolutely perfect. I couldn't write this well if I wrote for the next million years, and I'm a native speaker, so that's saying something. I really really hope for more, and I love this concept, this idea, and am so excited to see it continue. You're the best.
1/31/20, 10:28 PM
Martin, I really enjoyed this! Great job! That people feel something at the end is a credit to you as a writer. Can't wait to see where this goes.
1/31/20, 9:39 PM
really good story. Id love to collaborate with you on a story blufman1 on here email blufdude@aol.com
Martin
1/31/20, 8:44 PM
> As one who just found out they have colon cancer, a story like this becomes personal to me. I'm sorry to hear that. I really hope your cancer can be cured and you get well again! Writing about a terminal illness is always troublesome because there's always somebody who's affected somehow. But it was a pivotal point of the story I want to tell. --- > Unexpectedly sad conclusion :( I'm happy that this came across. It's a bit of a hard thing to do, to convey emotion, if the protagonist from which perspective you tell the story from, is just a himbo. But there are going to be more chapters and I hope you'll find the actual conclusion a bit more satisfying! --- Thank you all for commenting! Keep 'em coming please!
Anonymous
1/31/20, 8:37 PM
Unexpectedly sad conclusion :(
Anonymous
1/31/20, 6:45 PM
As one who just found out they have colon cancer, a story like this becomes personal to me.
1/31/20, 6:10 PM
Good job man. A super hot and interesting start. Looking forward to the rest.