Recent Comments

8/22/25, 6:27 AM
The methods used to establish dominance and control are much less relevant to me than the evolving slippery slope into total power exchange. Drugs, pheromones, hypnosis, and so much more are all good tools to achieve the desired brainwash and control. I loved both chapters equally, although both chapters had the same issue of being much much too short for my taste. Maybe i am easily addicted but when i find something i like, i want more or it!! I did wonder whether it might work better to switch the order of the chapters as it seems Teddy was enslaved first, and then presumably used to draw work colleagues like Byron into a similar enslavement scheme. In any case there is so much more to say about the nature of the clones and the background and ultimate goals of the Replica organization and its founders. Having been totally taken in by this story, my only real suggestion, more of a plea really, is that there be many more chapters as soon as possible. Thanks to noper for an exciting story, already hot but also with great potential.
8/22/25, 5:44 AM
Wow! Just wow! Like Anonymous i anticipated something along these lines early on, but the idea itself is certainly new to me and so full of potential for an arousing total power exchange, i was hooked immediately. The story as written certainly didn't disappoint -- incredibly hot!
8/22/25, 3:28 AM
Jack always makes a story that is totally believable. Eden Academy builds men.
Jay
8/22/25, 2:06 AM
The most incredible deflowering - not by Gray but a random "welfare" kid and livestreamed to 100k and continuing with a long line of random fuckers. Epic!
Mark
8/22/25, 12:38 AM
Judas Ring is one of my favorites from you ever. Can't wait for the next part!
8/20/25, 11:05 PM
LOVE this

8/21/25, 4:50 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Honestly, I wrote this mostly because I really like your stuff and and the old story "Wishes fulfilled" by Albatross

8/21/25, 9:32 PM
@[Slothyslothysloth](/user/show/1253105) I’m flattered!! I hope you’ll continue. Really enjoy this!
8/21/25, 7:31 PM
LOVE this story, as always you nail the himbo voice so well, I can practically hear Kent's voice in my ear. And I love the contrast between the "suggestiveness" of the locker room scene with poor dumb Kent showing it ALL to the viewers at home. Can't wait to read more!!
R P
8/21/25, 11:09 AM
I can’t wait to see the rest of Hayden’s initiation, this series is really hot!

8/21/25, 4:47 PM
@[R P](/user/show/2423100) I’m looking forward to writing the rest of Hayden’s initiation, so we’re in the same boat
8/21/25, 10:59 AM
This is one of the better-written stories that have been put up here in a while Bovine, and I'm loving reading it. I can't wait for Hayden to be claimed!

8/21/25, 4:47 PM
@[Mindwinder](/user/show/296830) Thank you so much! I hope the rest of the chapters live up this praise lol
Zero
8/21/25, 9:18 AM
This is a fun story would love to see what happens next and how things propagate.