Recent Comments

8/12/19, 5:17 AM
Oh. Wow. How very interesting. The whole "there is a dead bottom" as the initial premise being through out the window soon into the story was quite interesting. As is the whole setup of the master using the lie as a means of attracting the cop to his house, after hypnotizing him at bar the night before. So yeah very nice. I also love the bit of rimming, nice touch. Very fun. The method of writing - where we see only one side of the conversation - is an interesting one. It works for this sort of thing though I figure it might not last for a longer story. Still, nice work with an interesting theme. :)
Mar 31, 2019
rubaluva
4/5/19, 11:53 AM
The story was building really well, but it all came to a head pretty quickly, which was a pity.
Mar 31, 2019
Hypno_TPE_Master
4/1/19, 12:44 AM
Very hot. Would like to see more chapters of this story or just more stories from you in general.
Mar 31, 2019
Kevin
3/31/19, 10:41 PM
good story
Mar 31, 2019
Anonymous
3/31/19, 1:54 PM
damn, i wish this site had a mad libs-like feature where it asks you before you read the story to fill in the blanks, for example: Your name: Room mates name: and then it would auto fill the name in the story
Ruanraykung@me.com
3/8/19, 5:26 PM
GREAT WRITING. PLEASE NEED TO READ MORE!!!
LeadPb
9/10/18, 12:34 AM
Man, I've just read everything, all your work are spectacular. There's just the right balance, it's perfect, right here.
Stephen
9/8/18, 3:10 PM
Nice. I should change my name to Tim.... :-)
muscledrain
9/5/18, 9:10 AM
I want Jack to get a reputation for being a sex stud and see him become a Dom after he gains more confidence.
Anonymous
9/4/18, 3:29 PM
amazing... beautifully written..