Recent Comments

9/24/20, 12:18 AM
wow...thank you. that story is very very hot to me...I enjoyed it thoroughly
9/23/20, 8:01 PM
Super excited to see what develops from here, and thought this chapter was really well-written!
9/23/20, 6:34 PM
Please tell me there's more. I'd love to learn more about the white noise machine, Travis, and see how Andy trains Ian.
9/23/20, 6:31 PM
chapter 2 please. that was a great set up
Anonymous
9/23/20, 12:55 AM
Yeahhhh... not for me. I too love Karmic justice. I would love to hear the story of how Rob PAID Karma back for what he did to Ryan.
9/22/20, 2:37 PM
it's a good story.
Anonymous
9/21/20, 6:19 PM
Great story! For ideas, maybe Jay ends up being an Omega foot slave. :)
9/21/20, 4:49 PM
it is a really great story. can't wait for the next chapter.
9/21/20, 1:47 PM
The level of obedience from just a spiral felt a lil unrealistic. Regardless though I enjoyed the chapter and definitely had fun reading 😉
Anonymous
9/21/20, 12:26 PM
Love the direction that the story is taking, so can’t wait to see where it’s going to go next! That said, this part feels like it could have benefitted from some more editing, especially in the second half. There are places where punctuation starts to drift off and things needed a second take to make sense. With a little more honing in that area this could go from a good story to a great one!