Recent Comments

12/18/19, 2:49 AM
I really love the idea and format of the story here, but I feel like it could be just a hair longer. Maybe there could be more hints to that "snuff" situation past of the suspect's refutal, or maybe there could be a more detailed sex scene near the end. Granted, the latter would be harder considering that you're only using dialogue to propel the story, but check out Wesley Bracken's "Letters from Prison" to see how he does it. Again, this is an awesome idea, and I hope you keep running with it!
12/17/19, 4:11 AM
Also nobody dies so why is Snuff included. It seems like a false tag.
12/17/19, 3:10 AM
Good update. I still like the trick on things.
Anonymous
12/10/19, 8:48 PM
loved this story, absolutely fantastic, altho every time i heard the name richard evans i couldn't help but think of rich evans from redlettermedia lol
11/15/19, 4:00 AM
Short simple mind control. A good short read. I really liked the one sided conversation.
Anonymous
10/26/19, 12:14 PM
great work. One of the best series on here so far.....
Anonymous
10/26/19, 11:59 AM
Fantastic. Even better than part 1....definitely the stuff I like to read.....
Anonymous
10/26/19, 11:44 AM
Wow. I will move right on to the other chapters. But this is amazingly hot. Your writing is phenomenal.
MakeMeAPigToo
10/24/19, 5:46 AM
This has become my favorite story 🎃
10/24/19, 2:39 AM
A great addition to the story, well written as usual. Really hoping for some forced extreme obesity in the next chapter....