Recent Comments

10/16/19, 3:27 AM
That’s funny from the guy above me. If it’s always the same, why do you read it? That’s Wesley’s thing: the guy always loses. I think it’s super hot! The way Kyle transforms, the way he struggles, and ultimately how he is forced to submit to the boss. All mega hot.
Anonymous
10/16/19, 12:40 AM
More of the same torture porn we always see from this author. Kyle would have been more intriguing if he had won. Instead we get the same old story we've seen, over and over and over again - pigs and demons and torture - ho hum. Do something interesting that isn't this. This is past getting old and is now rather expected from you.
10/15/19, 9:13 PM
Super love the idea here, would love to see a sequel where we see how Kyle acts now that he's more like Gary, very hot!
Anonymous
10/12/19, 11:32 AM
I got so wet reading this
MakeMeAPigToo
10/11/19, 7:47 AM
Loved this again 🎃
10/10/19, 10:11 PM
Excellent! please continue writing
degoetz@yahoo.com
10/10/19, 8:59 PM
Amazingly hot
Anonymous
10/10/19, 5:23 AM
Love this 🎃
The Author
8/12/19, 9:11 PM
This story was an experiment and I completely agree that a longer length would have been 'too much'. Someone posted that they would like to see a story from a tops POV rather than the more common bottom-focus. I pondered this and then started thinking about minimalism and how many of my stories, as do others, go in to way more detail than they should, taking too much imagination away from the reader. So I decided to leave most of it up to the reader, including the dialog! Sort of like the Peanuts comic strips and movies where you never hear what the adults say. I also wanted the Oh Henry! twist and thought of an interrogation, so even like it seems as if is going there, it is not at all a snuff story. Hypnosis gave the perfect way for the top to implant the whole notion of a death to be investigated, but we all know the detective wanted it. Thanks for the comments.
8/12/19, 5:17 AM
Oh. Wow. How very interesting. The whole "there is a dead bottom" as the initial premise being through out the window soon into the story was quite interesting. As is the whole setup of the master using the lie as a means of attracting the cop to his house, after hypnotizing him at bar the night before. So yeah very nice. I also love the bit of rimming, nice touch. Very fun. The method of writing - where we see only one side of the conversation - is an interesting one. It works for this sort of thing though I figure it might not last for a longer story. Still, nice work with an interesting theme. :)