Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/10/19, 5:23 AM
Love this 🎃
The Author
8/12/19, 9:11 PM
This story was an experiment and I completely agree that a longer length would have been 'too much'. Someone posted that they would like to see a story from a tops POV rather than the more common bottom-focus. I pondered this and then started thinking about minimalism and how many of my stories, as do others, go in to way more detail than they should, taking too much imagination away from the reader. So I decided to leave most of it up to the reader, including the dialog! Sort of like the Peanuts comic strips and movies where you never hear what the adults say. I also wanted the Oh Henry! twist and thought of an interrogation, so even like it seems as if is going there, it is not at all a snuff story. Hypnosis gave the perfect way for the top to implant the whole notion of a death to be investigated, but we all know the detective wanted it. Thanks for the comments.
8/12/19, 5:17 AM
Oh. Wow. How very interesting. The whole "there is a dead bottom" as the initial premise being through out the window soon into the story was quite interesting. As is the whole setup of the master using the lie as a means of attracting the cop to his house, after hypnotizing him at bar the night before. So yeah very nice. I also love the bit of rimming, nice touch. Very fun. The method of writing - where we see only one side of the conversation - is an interesting one. It works for this sort of thing though I figure it might not last for a longer story. Still, nice work with an interesting theme. :)
Mar 31, 2019
rubaluva
4/5/19, 11:53 AM
The story was building really well, but it all came to a head pretty quickly, which was a pity.
Mar 31, 2019
Hypno_TPE_Master
4/1/19, 12:44 AM
Very hot. Would like to see more chapters of this story or just more stories from you in general.
Mar 31, 2019
Kevin
3/31/19, 10:41 PM
good story
Mar 31, 2019
Anonymous
3/31/19, 1:54 PM
damn, i wish this site had a mad libs-like feature where it asks you before you read the story to fill in the blanks, for example: Your name: Room mates name: and then it would auto fill the name in the story
Ruanraykung@me.com
3/8/19, 5:26 PM
GREAT WRITING. PLEASE NEED TO READ MORE!!!
LeadPb
9/10/18, 12:34 AM
Man, I've just read everything, all your work are spectacular. There's just the right balance, it's perfect, right here.
Stephen
9/8/18, 3:10 PM
Nice. I should change my name to Tim.... :-)