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SHITTY
1/15/20, 12:09 PM
I would like to eat stinking shit from THOSE GUARDS and ENRIQUE
MASTERs
1/15/20, 12:08 PM
Fucking hot, cummed twice over your story!
1/14/20, 7:39 PM
If only there was some kind of tag system, where by you could identify stories containing topics you don't like, so you don't need to read stories containing topics you don't like...
AsYouWish
1/14/20, 8:07 AM
Not a prude, but also not getting off on Scat.... to each their own.
Anonymous
1/13/20, 3:53 PM
I must be a prude. Who gets off on feces?
ScottishPig
1/13/20, 3:46 AM
Fun idea! Reminded me of mastershit88's stories, especially The 12 - which I'm sure you're familiar with!
Your soldier
1/8/20, 11:35 AM
great chapter i cannot wait for more!
Author
12/22/19, 6:25 PM
Well, perhaps 'clickbaiting' was too strong a term. Feel free to remove if desired. My intent was to enhance the surprise twist of the story, but I see your point.
12/18/19, 5:17 AM
Clickbaiting is not what the tags are for. Its fine as a hint in synopsis but as an actual tag, no, I think its wrong.
AgingAthlete
12/18/19, 3:31 AM
Thanks for the comments. Snuff: well, I did a bit of clickbaiting here. I frankly don't like snuff stories as they take things a bit too far for my tastes. That said, I liked the idea of *toying* with the concept, which is what this is. Apologies to anyone hoping for a death. That said, now I am thinking of an actual snuff story where the snuffed sub comes back as a very angry, and powerful, ghost top. How does that sound? Short: I was working towards a sort of 'O. Henry' kind of thing: short, sweet and surprising. Also, I thought the hidden dialog (see original story) might get tedious for the reader if it went too long.