Recent Comments

theozus
2/1/20, 6:39 PM
Dude, you legit made me too sad to cum, which I think is a testament to how effective and inventive your writing is. Seriously excited to see what comes next!
Anonymous
1/31/20, 11:01 PM
I really hope there's a backup of his mind stored somewhere. alternatively, having Alec find a note explaining everything when it's too late would make this feel like a kinky episode of the Twilight Zone or possibly Black Mirror.
firesix
1/31/20, 10:49 PM
Fuuuuuck. This is incredible. Your writing style and word choice is absolutely perfect. I couldn't write this well if I wrote for the next million years, and I'm a native speaker, so that's saying something. I really really hope for more, and I love this concept, this idea, and am so excited to see it continue. You're the best.
1/31/20, 10:28 PM
Martin, I really enjoyed this! Great job! That people feel something at the end is a credit to you as a writer. Can't wait to see where this goes.
1/31/20, 9:39 PM
really good story. Id love to collaborate with you on a story blufman1 on here email blufdude@aol.com
Martin
1/31/20, 8:44 PM
> As one who just found out they have colon cancer, a story like this becomes personal to me. I'm sorry to hear that. I really hope your cancer can be cured and you get well again! Writing about a terminal illness is always troublesome because there's always somebody who's affected somehow. But it was a pivotal point of the story I want to tell. --- > Unexpectedly sad conclusion :( I'm happy that this came across. It's a bit of a hard thing to do, to convey emotion, if the protagonist from which perspective you tell the story from, is just a himbo. But there are going to be more chapters and I hope you'll find the actual conclusion a bit more satisfying! --- Thank you all for commenting! Keep 'em coming please!
Anonymous
1/31/20, 8:37 PM
Unexpectedly sad conclusion :(
Anonymous
1/31/20, 6:45 PM
As one who just found out they have colon cancer, a story like this becomes personal to me.
1/31/20, 6:10 PM
Good job man. A super hot and interesting start. Looking forward to the rest.
malskin
1/31/20, 8:50 AM
I enjoyed the new chapter, for me it would have been better if Tim was more involved, with Alex seeing him totally covered in leather standing or kneeling besides His Leather Master, before the conditioning started to kick in - Tim with his slutty evil grin