Recent Comments

Jack
2/11/21, 4:00 AM
I have to be honest: this is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. I like the concept, and I absolutely love the idea of getting revenge on those people who hate and abuse. We so rarely get to see those people in real-life get what's coming to them, and reading about it here is a great catharsis. I know there are going to be people in the comments that tell you to go in a certain direction or to do or avoid certain things, but ignore them. You've got a good sense for the type of shit the group of people on this site like to read, so keep going! The ONLY thing I ask is that you take this series all the way. Give Vince the chance to fuck over every one in his life that made it miserable, and do it in whatever kinky way that you want.
2/11/21, 3:58 AM
Loving it so far, really good!
2/11/21, 3:52 AM
I can't wait for more! Great work.
2/11/21, 3:14 AM
the brothers need to be mindfucked
Ng5
2/11/21, 2:59 AM
looking forward to seeing his brothers get their just desserts and join their dad as Vince's playthings
nycboot
2/11/21, 2:18 AM
I really liked how you made the father so terribly guilty - and how it leads so smoothly into Vince taking advantage. I hope/assume by the end of the series Erik will be fully aware of becoming Vince's fucktoy.
2/11/21, 1:00 AM
cant wait to see what he does next
Anonymous
2/11/21, 12:42 AM
This is hot! Please continue
2/10/21, 11:42 PM
Loving this. Please continue.
2/10/21, 10:54 PM
as for the family, make the uncle the "straight gay" archetype, which means the he is gay but without any of the stereotypchal traits, and make him hook up with someone very flamboyant, as he was nicer, and was more on the misinformed side, so something lighter was in order, for his oldest brother, make him a himbo jock and a total bottom, for the other brother, make him a cock sucker who really gets around all of them making sure the sex was safe, off course, as for the dad make him a walking camp gay stereotype, make him a safe sex slut, maybe whore him up, with the main character ending up with a good man