Recent Comments

3/27/20, 12:02 PM
I will continue doing my Pharaoh's bidding. You will witness the rest of my work. Let the stories set in and you will be prepared for His reawakening.
Slave Abdamelek
3/27/20, 11:59 AM
Thank you for the feedback guys. It's what keeps me writing and gives an idea how to best tantalize you.
3/27/20, 12:21 AM
Amazing idea and execution; to go from seer and author to part of the story. Really makes me want to enter a few stories on this site. Well done; so now that you're in your world what are you going to do for your Pharaoh?
nycboot
3/27/20, 12:00 AM
I love self-referential stories. :)
nycboot
3/26/20, 11:47 PM
I've re-read this chapter again. In the prologue the guy intones a prayer. But in this chapter, it's as if the pacing of the words is a prayer. Especially after Adom has shocked Raveed into submission. Beautiful!
3/26/20, 4:06 PM
A hot piece, great writing and interesting story but confusing as hell with no real resolution. I have no real idea what was going on! Still liked it though.
Mar 24, 2020
3/24/20, 11:51 PM
short, sweet with a hint of topical. Liked it.
3/9/20, 4:25 PM
Good start ! Can't wait to read more ;)
Anonymous
2/25/20, 11:54 PM
Side note about MA, the age of consent is actually 16 y/o. So if there was a complaint about this story, it's technically still legal in IRL (didn't see original complaint) minus the sharing of photos of himself that isn't legal while under 18, but yeah it's fiction and clearly stated.
Martin
2/23/20, 7:55 AM
Thanks anon. I'll let this stay, as it's simply straight to the point. The original complaints have been deleted though.