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2/16/26, 7:07 PM
Incredible
2/16/26, 2:18 PM
I really like it! Special thanks for the drawings - they are wonderful
2/16/26, 1:27 PM
Next chapter ASAP please.
2/16/26, 3:34 AM
Hot story, can't wait for more! I'd really love to see the boys turn the tables on their coaches and the others that turned them into this eventually, I'd love to see them get their vengeance!

DrA
2/16/26, 8:56 AM
@[Dscott](/user/show/10070920) Thx for reaching out! One never knows what will happen in the future:)
2/15/26, 1:08 PM
tears. OMG... I am tooooo "into" this wonderful story.

2/16/26, 3:55 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Glad you and others were able to still enjoy this one even though it’s a bit heavier and definitely not as fun as the others. Still working on the next one, so stay tuned!
2/14/26, 2:09 PM
...also, the used scent-filled underwear in the lecture... are you trying to kill me with this stuff? My head got swimmy just reading about inhaling that lovely man-smell.

2/15/26, 12:45 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Do not drive or operate heavy machinery while under the influence of Chris’ funk.

2/15/26, 1:16 PM
@[Lonely Djinn](/user/show/945165) sometimes you read something and you think... I bet that, if we met, this author and I would be fun-filled friends... I think you are so clever, clear-minded, and I can tell that I LOVE the way that you think and your fantasy-side of your brain works. I bet you are fun-spirited and funny as heck. This tale speaks to me in a meaningful way... and, as a result, I think you are spectacular! ...there... I said it!

2/16/26, 3:53 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) :blush: Aaah, you’re just flattering me now hehe! Thanks so much for power-reading through and I’m so glad you’ve liked it. I’ll do my darndest to get the next chapter out soon, and I hope it lives up to all the praise! Xxx
Anonymous
2/16/26, 3:43 AM
Me ook.. me dumb ook...
2/15/26, 10:40 PM
I'm just sorry he never had his moment with Derek.... Great story!
Connor
2/15/26, 10:21 PM
Definitely agree with Hudson on this one, it is strange that they change races and speak of superficial identities, only to proceed to speak in very stereotypical AAVE. It almost feels fetishizing of ethnicity, especially to imply that some races are “sexier” then others as is implied by the MC becoming a “better version of himself” which is a big red flag imo. Also… turn the racist hate crime guy into a sexy black guy as punishment? Honestly don’t see how that’s punishment, especially when this guy has been basically killing people by converting them into essence.
2/15/26, 9:44 PM
Thanks !!Great story !!