Recent Comments

Slave Abdamelek
3/27/20, 11:59 AM
Thank you for the feedback guys. It's what keeps me writing and gives an idea how to best tantalize you.
3/27/20, 12:21 AM
Amazing idea and execution; to go from seer and author to part of the story. Really makes me want to enter a few stories on this site. Well done; so now that you're in your world what are you going to do for your Pharaoh?
nycboot
3/27/20, 12:00 AM
I love self-referential stories. :)
nycboot
3/26/20, 11:47 PM
I've re-read this chapter again. In the prologue the guy intones a prayer. But in this chapter, it's as if the pacing of the words is a prayer. Especially after Adom has shocked Raveed into submission. Beautiful!
3/26/20, 4:06 PM
A hot piece, great writing and interesting story but confusing as hell with no real resolution. I have no real idea what was going on! Still liked it though.
Mar 24, 2020
3/24/20, 11:51 PM
short, sweet with a hint of topical. Liked it.
3/9/20, 4:25 PM
Good start ! Can't wait to read more ;)
Anonymous
2/25/20, 11:54 PM
Side note about MA, the age of consent is actually 16 y/o. So if there was a complaint about this story, it's technically still legal in IRL (didn't see original complaint) minus the sharing of photos of himself that isn't legal while under 18, but yeah it's fiction and clearly stated.
Martin
2/23/20, 7:55 AM
Thanks anon. I'll let this stay, as it's simply straight to the point. The original complaints have been deleted though.
Anonymous
2/23/20, 7:02 AM
No, he shouldn't be ashamed. It's you who needs to get a grip. He's not merely 'complaining.' How many times does it need to be bashed over people's heads before they understand? Not every country is the U.S. The character is not underage to every reader. And come on, please be respectful. Martin asked for this to be discussed elsewhere. This poor author's story is turning into a battleground. I know this will be deleted soon but I had to say it. You have some inner strength to deal with this B.S all the time, Martin. BTW I'm aware the character says he's from Boston bla bla. BUT, this story is still fiction, and doesn't truly represent America, or maybe it does, as I'm sure some younger people do get into sticky situations in that country, at that age *shrugs*