Recent Comments

10/7/20, 8:24 PM
I really liked this a lot, especially when the narrator was recounting past events. Once he gets caught up to the present moment, I think I would have switched to 3rd person narration, just to give the detective more of a role (and a voice) in the story--which, IMO, would have made the conclusion hotter.
nycboot
10/5/20, 6:17 PM
Lovely story. I would've expected it to follow the regular narrative path - but you chose to start it when the protagonist is already in it, and I found that a lot of fun as he tries and can't figure out what's going on. Lots of fun!!
10/5/20, 5:34 PM
I'd like to see Levi rebel more, get some punishment.
10/5/20, 1:12 PM
Your writing is incredible! Great to see the backstory.
Anonymous
10/5/20, 12:52 PM
This is my sex nightmare ❤️
giveintothemusk
10/5/20, 11:10 AM
Oh gosh I love this series and your writing. Wish it was longer if anything, but that's a compliment!
10/5/20, 5:35 AM
Great story right to the end! Very hot and very fun!
10/4/20, 5:05 PM
I really enjoyed this story!!
10/4/20, 1:30 PM
My favorite story so far.
Jake
10/4/20, 4:58 AM
I hope we get to hear more about the adventures of Barkley and his new family.