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6/5/20, 5:08 PM
You're welcome! Glad you men are liking Thor's journey.
Anonymous
6/4/20, 7:23 PM
more please. always live a submissive cop
6/4/20, 7:34 AM
i really hope you continue this series. its so detailed and fascinating!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/4/20, 2:46 AM
Certainly my favorite elements going on. Wish I was in that position some day.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/2/20, 10:07 PM
Nothing came in so far. Can you please resend it?
6/2/20, 5:58 PM
DAMN Another amazing chapter. THANK YOU!!
6/1/20, 1:17 AM
The violence was requested by the commissioner, but I'm not opposed to gore myself--I just tend to avoid it since most folks don't like it. I'd always rather write something that sticks with you, rather than something you feel like you've already seen before!
nycboot
5/31/20, 12:05 PM
Thanks for this story! I first read the uncensored version and then this version, and I like this version significantly more. I find all the violence and gore a distraction from the narrative. Although violence for its own sake is not my thing, I can definitely understand how it can be a turn on. As I commented at the end of chapter 1, I love the idea of a guy discovering he's a demon and trying to wrestle and understand himself and his urges. But then that aspect of the story gets replaced by a demon trying but unable to satisfy himself - it's like it starts one way and then morphs into another story. In other words, it seems like two different stories spliced together. Your uncensored version has a kind of repeating ending (much more than here) which was very atmospherically haunting, reminding me of the 1946 film "Dead of Night." I suppose you wanted to leave the reader in a mood like Hugh, always wanting more but never achieving it. I wonder if you might consider creating a different Hugh story where it's established from the outset that he's a twisted demon, but then tries to search for more and actually finds it. (Personally I would like to play around with the notion of a guy discovering and coming to grips with being a demon - I think that's probably too tame for your taste.) Again thanks for this story - I won't say it's my favorite, but it really makes a strong impression and sticks in the mind.
5/31/20, 11:56 AM
I Love This, Thank You
M.
5/31/20, 3:27 AM
Holy FUCK! That was such a hot chapter. Many thanks!