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nycboot
6/19/20, 1:43 AM
slave abdamelek: I love the statement because it shows the slave mindset, for example, that servitude is liberation. I've known quite a few slaves whose lives were kinda messed up, and their Masters took over and set them on a good path. So in that context, being controlled for one's own protection is a recognition of the slave ethos. So what makes the quote amusing and ironic is that the character challenges that statement - clearly he is going to discover what control is. A great way to foreshadow.
Slave Abdamelek
6/18/20, 10:59 PM
nycboot, why do you love it? :) I know things are a little slow as the stage is set for the next epic battle, but it'll pay off!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/18/20, 2:48 PM
Wish somebody would make into a dog like that, no questions or limits.
Anonymous
6/18/20, 2:34 PM
amazing. nice chapter.
6/18/20, 12:16 PM
you are doing an amazing job, thank you! I love it man.
Kovu
6/18/20, 7:45 AM
woof! definitely needs a sequel
6/18/20, 6:16 AM
it was a hot story. you should totally do a sequel. I loved it.
nycboot
6/18/20, 1:59 AM
A bit shlocky but fun. I love the exclamation *It is pretty hypocritical to say people are being controlled for their own protection*
Anonymous
6/18/20, 12:03 AM
Be fun to see another part where the second missionary is broken in!
6/17/20, 9:47 PM
Thank you! I'm working hard on making Thor's experience not only hot as fuck, but relatable.