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6/26/20, 11:34 AM
OMG this is fucking hot
Dam
6/21/20, 2:24 PM
I keep checking this, can't wait to see an update!
Slave Abdamelek
6/19/20, 9:40 PM
nycboot: yes, that is the central theme, you have a great understanding of the slaves' mindset. That giving up your free will is maybe the greatest possible liberation.
6/19/20, 8:52 AM
I love how subtle everything is
nycboot
6/19/20, 1:43 AM
slave abdamelek: I love the statement because it shows the slave mindset, for example, that servitude is liberation. I've known quite a few slaves whose lives were kinda messed up, and their Masters took over and set them on a good path. So in that context, being controlled for one's own protection is a recognition of the slave ethos. So what makes the quote amusing and ironic is that the character challenges that statement - clearly he is going to discover what control is. A great way to foreshadow.
Slave Abdamelek
6/18/20, 10:59 PM
nycboot, why do you love it? :) I know things are a little slow as the stage is set for the next epic battle, but it'll pay off!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/18/20, 2:48 PM
Wish somebody would make into a dog like that, no questions or limits.
Anonymous
6/18/20, 2:34 PM
amazing. nice chapter.
6/18/20, 12:16 PM
you are doing an amazing job, thank you! I love it man.
Kovu
6/18/20, 7:45 AM
woof! definitely needs a sequel