Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/15/20, 2:03 PM
Really needs editing as sentences run on or stop abruptly with periods, commas and semi-colons mixed up. First paragraph makes no sense... There might be a great story in there but my brain hurt trying to get through the first lines and gave up.
Nutiper
7/15/20, 5:34 AM
This was so fun!! And how enjoyable it is to read a fairie story on this site that gets all the fey details just right.
7/14/20, 12:44 PM
I actually love this series so far. I hope to see the frat daddy reinstate the coach as a "proper" coach. Other than that, I had another idea if you would like. Essentially, each of these boys are in a program of study at the campus. I was thinking that since the boys of this frat are learning to become real men, the head faculty of each of their programs could also teach them respect and discipline by being appointed as the boys' masters for their duration of their program. This power over the boys is not to be advised, but to teach them how to become Men in their field of study, whether is be politics, or law enforcement, or a science of some kind. And at the end of every year or just before graduation the boy becomes the master of their appointed professor, not as a reward, but as a test to see what they've learned and will be graded by their professor. The idea is a little complex, following around a lot of people, but you can narrow that down by having multiple boys belonging to one faculty professor because im sure more than one boy is in the same program with one another. I just thought I'd contribute. im not very good at writing myself, but i offer ideas when i can.
ShitPig
7/14/20, 5:39 AM
Wow that was hot! Major is one of my favorite authors so seeing you added upon his trials through hell story had me excited from the start!! You did not disappoint!!! šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„
7/14/20, 12:13 AM
Such a beautifully written - and hot - story! I enjoyed it immensely.
vicbiguy
7/13/20, 8:32 PM
I too am an enthusiast of stories of the Fae, and can compare this to L. Sprague De Camp's magical and hilarious novels. However this one has better sex than De Camp. Please do give us more adventures of Chance and Fairchilde, ( who I suspect is indeed a changeling). And thanks for a really good read!
Anonymous
7/13/20, 6:38 PM
Only thing missing was a last scene from Chance's POV, once he returned to the mortal realm
7/13/20, 3:02 PM
I absolutely loved this! Nerdy, funny, well plotted, and hot as hell. (I’m just jealous that nothing like this ever happened to me when I went to outdoor Shakespeare performances.) I hope we see a lot more from you!
7/13/20, 1:15 PM
this was hot as hell and sooooooooo well written! i'm a shakespearean actor and midsummer is my fave play and Puck is my favorite character and this was amazing! i would love to read more about Chance and Fairchilde's adventures with the fae, or about any other men who have stumbled into Puck's service!!
7/13/20, 2:24 AM
that was genuinely well done i loved it