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giveintothemusk
7/23/20, 6:38 AM
😚👌
That one guy
7/23/20, 2:42 AM
i just... feel sad after reading all these. I think what makes it sad rather than hot is that Tom didn't do anything to provoke the blackmail and he's just miserable the entire time as his life gets destroyed. i hope the ending is a bit happier with him either enjoying everything or with Jay finally laying off him.
Johnthedoe
7/22/20, 9:15 AM
No worries the rewrite is currently in progress and there'll be plenty of sequels after the true ending of this story. I do have an entire world to take over after all.
7/21/20, 10:31 PM
More please. This needs to be redone and drawn out day by day then continuing after transformation. Excellent story.
7/21/20, 4:58 PM
Wonderfully written-literary, arousing, and evocative. As earlier commentors have said, it is not blantantly erotic, but it is indeed sensual and appealing in the way only a truly good fantasy tale can be.
7/20/20, 3:05 PM
Such a wonderful treat, of the Fae and their lore. Every rule and nuance present in a wonderful trip to the land of Faerie. Thank you for sharing, and I can only hope for future delights.
7/20/20, 7:45 AM
Now I know this is fiction, because I've never met a man who's as understanding, compassionate, and forgiving as Daddy was towards Carter. Personally, I was hoping that Carter would get to have some depraved perverted mind control fun with Daddy, or at least a detailed confession of the debauchery that he'd committed for him to age so quickly, before he broke down and admitted his fault. But as a masochist, I'm used to being denied.
Johnthedoe
7/19/20, 5:33 AM
It's coming. I've already started adding everything I yanked out trying to make it fit in the space allowed by the challenge back in. Expect an unknown number of chapters sometime in early August after the challenge ends.
7/19/20, 5:19 AM
Really need more of this
7/18/20, 6:56 AM
Carter is lucky! I'd have died and gone to Heaven if I could've managed a beard down to my stomach in college!