Recent Comments

9/10/20, 9:12 AM
I've been working on it every chance I got and the first chapter should be up soon as long as September doesn't become concentrated 2020 like August did. I had so many people who needed my help and so much that needed to be done that I could only get the time to work on this infrequently. Thanks for the offer but the editing is the thing that has been giving me the least problems. The biggest bottleneck has been my decision to divide up the first day into multiple chapters. Some scenes are easy to place but I keep changing my mind on which others should be placed where in between them. The first day is going to be 3 to 5 chapters depending on exactly which order I end up deciding on. My brain also gave me an idea for the pandemic challenge so I will need to devote more time to it this month due to the deadline. I will be publishing the first (and maybe second) chapter(s) before I switch over to it though. Can't work on a new challenge while this unholy monster still haunts my nightmares after all.
9/10/20, 3:26 AM
Loved the concept and world you built. Looking forward to seeing this developed as intended. Any update on the progress of making this into chapters? Willing to help edit if needed.
9/3/20, 6:36 AM
Just read through the whole thing, and I'm loving it! Please keep going!
Slave Abdamelek
8/22/20, 8:16 PM
Thank you for your continuing support. As you see, it is very difficult to decide which side to root for, since they are both very powerful and seem to be deserving of ruling over men. But of course, I am on my Pharaoh's side and will never again be tempted to leave it.
8/22/20, 3:21 PM
I check back so often, I'm always so eager to see what will happen next. Your pieces excite me like few authors on this website do, the pacing and material and.... Latent eroticism in your writing is so captivating. I hope you never stop. Poor Darius, being tricked into forgetting... I would help him remember. I am so conflicted.... I would be so willing to help the pharaoh, but if I were to see the scene play out, to see Darius be made blank, I wouldn't be able to stop myself from falling under Mered Nahab's away. His power is so.... Influential.
Anonymous
8/20/20, 3:52 AM
is there going to be more of this story?
The_Supernatural_D
8/19/20, 12:05 AM
This is resonating with me in ways I wasn't expecting. I think I know what that means...
8/13/20, 11:52 AM
Your story build-up was great! You had me hard & leaking from the start all the way to the end. I wanted to be the biker and experience everything. I want, no need, to read more, please Sir!
8/12/20, 10:35 AM
Thank you ! This motivate me to keep me writing. I'll try to do better next time.
Maccxuel
8/12/20, 5:13 AM
an incredible story, it lacks some improvements, but they are minimal; Good work, keep it up