Recent Comments

9/18/20, 9:10 AM
quite a good story. can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
9/15/20, 2:14 PM
Love the ending! What a mind fuck twist. Would have like the story to be longer, but it was great, I like your writing style and I hope you write more!
9/12/20, 7:38 PM
Thanks for the feedback so far. Rob is a narcissistic sociopath. If you were duped by him, like Ryan was... well contact me, and maybe I should write the next story about you ;).
9/12/20, 3:43 PM
Me personally I liked the ending.
Tommi95
9/12/20, 10:52 AM
Good story, but bad ending. Ryan is meant to be Rob's slave, not Brute's slave. If I understood well, Ryan will spend his life serving Brute, not Rob. Rob tricked him. Ryan is obviously not happy, he finds Brute disgusting and repulsive. He deserved happiness. I too want justice. I want Rob's plane to crush, the collar to be accidentally broken so that Ryan can escape during a delivery, report everything to the police, and get in possession of his money.
Anonymous
9/12/20, 3:35 AM
I haver to admit that I like a story of Karmic equality and justice. Rob fucks this guy over and end of story. No sense that Slave is happy or content or satisfied; just another shmuck who never realised his potential; lived in denial and will die a miserable slave to some opportunist. It offends my sense of justice and balance. I would love to see you come up with an alternative ending
9/11/20, 4:04 PM
great story! could have been a slower build but it was hot & creative!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/10/20, 10:58 PM
I need this kind of special delivery service immediately (if not sooner). I have all sorts of locking gear here, just need ANYBODY to lock me in & take over those pesty keys.
Anonymous
9/10/20, 9:01 PM
Havent read the story yet, the long tag list is a bit overwhelming!
Anonymous
9/10/20, 8:11 PM
Really liked the writing style, but it felt like you were trying to cram **a lot** of different fetishes into the story. That left some things feeling like they were just thrown in to tick a box (and give you an extra story tag) rather than really serving a purpose