Recent Comments

9/12/20, 7:38 PM
Thanks for the feedback so far. Rob is a narcissistic sociopath. If you were duped by him, like Ryan was... well contact me, and maybe I should write the next story about you ;).
9/12/20, 3:43 PM
Me personally I liked the ending.
Tommi95
9/12/20, 10:52 AM
Good story, but bad ending. Ryan is meant to be Rob's slave, not Brute's slave. If I understood well, Ryan will spend his life serving Brute, not Rob. Rob tricked him. Ryan is obviously not happy, he finds Brute disgusting and repulsive. He deserved happiness. I too want justice. I want Rob's plane to crush, the collar to be accidentally broken so that Ryan can escape during a delivery, report everything to the police, and get in possession of his money.
Anonymous
9/12/20, 3:35 AM
I haver to admit that I like a story of Karmic equality and justice. Rob fucks this guy over and end of story. No sense that Slave is happy or content or satisfied; just another shmuck who never realised his potential; lived in denial and will die a miserable slave to some opportunist. It offends my sense of justice and balance. I would love to see you come up with an alternative ending
9/11/20, 4:04 PM
great story! could have been a slower build but it was hot & creative!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/10/20, 10:58 PM
I need this kind of special delivery service immediately (if not sooner). I have all sorts of locking gear here, just need ANYBODY to lock me in & take over those pesty keys.
Anonymous
9/10/20, 9:01 PM
Havent read the story yet, the long tag list is a bit overwhelming!
Anonymous
9/10/20, 8:11 PM
Really liked the writing style, but it felt like you were trying to cram **a lot** of different fetishes into the story. That left some things feeling like they were just thrown in to tick a box (and give you an extra story tag) rather than really serving a purpose
9/10/20, 9:12 AM
I've been working on it every chance I got and the first chapter should be up soon as long as September doesn't become concentrated 2020 like August did. I had so many people who needed my help and so much that needed to be done that I could only get the time to work on this infrequently. Thanks for the offer but the editing is the thing that has been giving me the least problems. The biggest bottleneck has been my decision to divide up the first day into multiple chapters. Some scenes are easy to place but I keep changing my mind on which others should be placed where in between them. The first day is going to be 3 to 5 chapters depending on exactly which order I end up deciding on. My brain also gave me an idea for the pandemic challenge so I will need to devote more time to it this month due to the deadline. I will be publishing the first (and maybe second) chapter(s) before I switch over to it though. Can't work on a new challenge while this unholy monster still haunts my nightmares after all.
9/10/20, 3:26 AM
Loved the concept and world you built. Looking forward to seeing this developed as intended. Any update on the progress of making this into chapters? Willing to help edit if needed.