Recent Comments

9/19/20, 1:08 AM
Hearing comments like yours encourages me to write more. Thank you for that.
9/18/20, 1:53 PM
Great story.. Impressive for first attempt. Look forward to chapter 2
9/18/20, 12:16 PM
Looking forward to what happens next!
Anonymous
9/18/20, 9:56 AM
I loved this! So many things were just perfect - I love chastity and I'm so glad that people seem to be including it more and more. Yes, the ending was on the extreme side of things; most of us have had brushes with narcissists and psychopaths in our lives, and we're the worse for it. But I think with stories on this site, we're all aware enough to separate the fantasy from reality. I understand some other commenters saying how it caught them off guard. If anything I wanted more - it wasn't rushed or anything but I think it could definitely be continued if you wanted that, or a spin off. Your writing is fantastic and I hope you keep going :)
9/18/20, 9:38 AM
very fun start. excited to see where it leads
9/18/20, 9:10 AM
quite a good story. can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
9/15/20, 2:14 PM
Love the ending! What a mind fuck twist. Would have like the story to be longer, but it was great, I like your writing style and I hope you write more!
9/12/20, 7:38 PM
Thanks for the feedback so far. Rob is a narcissistic sociopath. If you were duped by him, like Ryan was... well contact me, and maybe I should write the next story about you ;).
9/12/20, 3:43 PM
Me personally I liked the ending.
Tommi95
9/12/20, 10:52 AM
Good story, but bad ending. Ryan is meant to be Rob's slave, not Brute's slave. If I understood well, Ryan will spend his life serving Brute, not Rob. Rob tricked him. Ryan is obviously not happy, he finds Brute disgusting and repulsive. He deserved happiness. I too want justice. I want Rob's plane to crush, the collar to be accidentally broken so that Ryan can escape during a delivery, report everything to the police, and get in possession of his money.