Recent Comments

8/22/20, 3:21 PM
I check back so often, I'm always so eager to see what will happen next. Your pieces excite me like few authors on this website do, the pacing and material and.... Latent eroticism in your writing is so captivating. I hope you never stop. Poor Darius, being tricked into forgetting... I would help him remember. I am so conflicted.... I would be so willing to help the pharaoh, but if I were to see the scene play out, to see Darius be made blank, I wouldn't be able to stop myself from falling under Mered Nahab's away. His power is so.... Influential.
Anonymous
8/20/20, 3:52 AM
is there going to be more of this story?
The_Supernatural_D
8/19/20, 12:05 AM
This is resonating with me in ways I wasn't expecting. I think I know what that means...
8/13/20, 11:52 AM
Your story build-up was great! You had me hard & leaking from the start all the way to the end. I wanted to be the biker and experience everything. I want, no need, to read more, please Sir!
8/12/20, 10:35 AM
Thank you ! This motivate me to keep me writing. I'll try to do better next time.
Maccxuel
8/12/20, 5:13 AM
an incredible story, it lacks some improvements, but they are minimal; Good work, keep it up
8/8/20, 4:20 PM
Gotta say, the haircutting scene, especially where the guy cries was really off-putting for me. All i could think of was how shaving people's heads has been done to de-humanise and humiliate people in concentration camps. That was just... too much for me and i stopped there. I still enjoy your works, but not this one, sorry mate, just my personal opinion.
8/3/20, 7:30 AM
I agree with the crowd, this has a lot of potential. And like potato chips, even if it is similar to other werewolf stories (though none on this site that I can think of), there's always an appetite for more.
Johnthedoe
7/31/20, 5:35 AM
Yeah the original version was much less cramped but my brain added so many interconnected plot lines that trying to fit it in the word count allowance of the challenge scrambled everything. It's taking me quite some time to weave them all back together but I will make it happen.
7/30/20, 9:52 PM
Really nice series, well written and so hot! Hope there will be more exploration and adventures for Thor!