Recent Comments

9/20/20, 3:04 AM
Nice, keep the feet, love it <3
editor
9/19/20, 9:33 PM
Great story, please keep writing. Also...if you need an editor ask me to email you. I can help with spelling and such.
Anonymous
9/19/20, 6:53 PM
I love camping story.
9/19/20, 1:08 AM
Hearing comments like yours encourages me to write more. Thank you for that.
9/18/20, 1:53 PM
Great story.. Impressive for first attempt. Look forward to chapter 2
9/18/20, 12:16 PM
Looking forward to what happens next!
Anonymous
9/18/20, 9:56 AM
I loved this! So many things were just perfect - I love chastity and I'm so glad that people seem to be including it more and more. Yes, the ending was on the extreme side of things; most of us have had brushes with narcissists and psychopaths in our lives, and we're the worse for it. But I think with stories on this site, we're all aware enough to separate the fantasy from reality. I understand some other commenters saying how it caught them off guard. If anything I wanted more - it wasn't rushed or anything but I think it could definitely be continued if you wanted that, or a spin off. Your writing is fantastic and I hope you keep going :)
9/18/20, 9:38 AM
very fun start. excited to see where it leads
9/18/20, 9:10 AM
quite a good story. can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
9/15/20, 2:14 PM
Love the ending! What a mind fuck twist. Would have like the story to be longer, but it was great, I like your writing style and I hope you write more!