Recent Comments

Jake
10/4/20, 4:58 AM
I hope we get to hear more about the adventures of Barkley and his new family.
10/4/20, 3:16 AM
Great concluding chapter to this hot story! Thanks for the explanation of Travis's motivation and the connection between Travis and Andy.
Anonymous
10/4/20, 1:45 AM
i love stories like these, when they are trapped in their own mind. great revenge story!
10/3/20, 11:42 PM
Yes, I made this one shorter because it's actually half of a chapter that was getting too long.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
10/3/20, 11:33 PM
I wish I could find a file to change me like that.
10/3/20, 10:46 PM
****Loved this story and hope it's only the first part of more!
10/3/20, 7:57 PM
Really nice scene! Jason's and the Caesar's (I forgot his name, paradoxaly) stories captivate me as much as the prince's or the ongoing power changes. But it's really short... I hope it means a lot happens next chapters, at least in status quo, even if they are indeed massive changes in this one too.
10/3/20, 7:43 AM
We'll get there. . . eventually.
10/3/20, 7:42 AM
well I can't wait to see where this goes
10/3/20, 7:36 AM
Most of what you read before is gone for now. I've been working on recreating the original storyline that I butchered in an attempt to make it fit in under the 10k word limit. This is only the first chapter of many that are on the way as soon as I get them finished. I have bits and pieces of future chapters that are already written, and I just need to get all the pieces necessary for the next chapter in line completed. I'm currently working on completing my entry for the pandemic challenge, but I'll get back to this story once it's published.