Recent Comments

Nutiper
10/8/20, 1:37 AM
Oh geez I *love* the voice of this piece, and those sly little humor moments. ("That was the first superspreader event" had me laughing aloud. If only real-life superspreader events were... that eventful........) Also I really liked that peek into sex dungeon culture, and I enjoyed the way the story combined an actual portrait of a realistic kink dungeon with the sci-fi nanites plot. (Of course, the moment the narrative said "...though they could also be fed an electrolyte and protein-filled gel medium..." I was like HMM, OH DEAR, HOW WILL THIS POSSIBLY GO WRONG.) Sexy nanite fetish clothing ravenous for bukkake — this was just such a fun story to read. Oh, wanted to add: not only does this story have a fantastic opening line, but it has an equally fantastic and gonzo closing line. Like, damn, who expected a sentient pandemic that, instead of wiping out the human race, goes "hmm actually let's get these humans some spaceships *so that we can infect aliens too*."
Lakritz24
10/8/20, 1:35 AM
Loving You Too. I love him.
10/7/20, 9:18 PM
Great narrative style, love the concept! Got me thinking about all the F9 orgies those little buggers instigated! Very well done!
10/7/20, 8:24 PM
I really liked this a lot, especially when the narrator was recounting past events. Once he gets caught up to the present moment, I think I would have switched to 3rd person narration, just to give the detective more of a role (and a voice) in the story--which, IMO, would have made the conclusion hotter.
nycboot
10/5/20, 6:17 PM
Lovely story. I would've expected it to follow the regular narrative path - but you chose to start it when the protagonist is already in it, and I found that a lot of fun as he tries and can't figure out what's going on. Lots of fun!!
10/5/20, 5:34 PM
I'd like to see Levi rebel more, get some punishment.
10/5/20, 1:12 PM
Your writing is incredible! Great to see the backstory.
Anonymous
10/5/20, 12:52 PM
This is my sex nightmare ❤️
giveintothemusk
10/5/20, 11:10 AM
Oh gosh I love this series and your writing. Wish it was longer if anything, but that's a compliment!
10/5/20, 5:35 AM
Great story right to the end! Very hot and very fun!