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NZDom
10/10/20, 9:59 PM
looking forward to seeing more! love how the beast is unaware of the changes happening to him. He just takes things as a natural part of him
10/10/20, 4:02 PM
I like this, excited for the next chapter.
10/10/20, 2:55 PM
interesting... i want to see where it goes.. what other uses he'll have for Franks muscles!
10/10/20, 9:23 AM
interesting premise. nicely written. always thrilled for chapter 2. cant wait to see how this plays out
10/10/20, 8:58 AM
nice! another big sub small sub! cant wait for the 2md chapter!
10/9/20, 12:59 PM
when an update?
boi98229
10/9/20, 6:16 AM
Wow! i have read some *really good* stories on this site, but i think this was the best, not only among the 'pandemic' stories, but including all the stories i've read here. The scene in the dungeon of the sex club was so reminiscent of my own visit to the Power Exchange in San Francisco, where my host member was a regular volunteer almost every Friday on the flogging bench in a impact play session designed to entertain and excite the crowd. Since then, i had my own first impact play session closer to home in which i was bound and flogged. During the session the Top would occasionally check in with me to make sure the session was proceeding well. Given these two real live experiences in particular, the Dungeon scene in this story became a living experience for me, and helped to bring the whole story to vivid life. i think the whole idea of an evolving symbiotic relationship between a sentient nanobot population and a human is brilliant! The whole plot progression was so realistically plausible as soon as you accepted the 'reality' of F9. It flowed perfectly. i am so hoping you plan to continue with this story after you win this pandemic story-writing contest!! Please! At the least, i need to know your username once the contest is over. i definitely plan to read all your stories as soon as i can! Thanks so much for your imagination, writing skills, and willingness to share them.
10/8/20, 7:42 PM
Yay, nanites !! And the story is well written too. Thanks !
Robodrone
10/8/20, 2:25 PM
Excitedly awaiting our upgrade!
Nutiper
10/8/20, 1:37 AM
Oh geez I *love* the voice of this piece, and those sly little humor moments. ("That was the first superspreader event" had me laughing aloud. If only real-life superspreader events were... that eventful........) Also I really liked that peek into sex dungeon culture, and I enjoyed the way the story combined an actual portrait of a realistic kink dungeon with the sci-fi nanites plot. (Of course, the moment the narrative said "...though they could also be fed an electrolyte and protein-filled gel medium..." I was like HMM, OH DEAR, HOW WILL THIS POSSIBLY GO WRONG.) Sexy nanite fetish clothing ravenous for bukkake — this was just such a fun story to read. Oh, wanted to add: not only does this story have a fantastic opening line, but it has an equally fantastic and gonzo closing line. Like, damn, who expected a sentient pandemic that, instead of wiping out the human race, goes "hmm actually let's get these humans some spaceships *so that we can infect aliens too*."