Recent Comments

12/4/20, 2:52 AM
Lots of potential for future chapters. A few minor typo issues, but easily read through. Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
12/4/20, 1:43 AM
Thanks Evan!
Evan
12/4/20, 1:28 AM
Creative use of the old classic. Great job. Congrats on your first story.
12/3/20, 10:03 PM
What a wonderful, intimately written tale, friend. I adore the dialogue. Very intimate and brings across character well. This is a lovely and sexy piece.
12/3/20, 3:39 PM
Thanks man! I didn't really wanna do Chapters as my first story but instead just replease it all as one whole thing. Definetly noted though! Glad you enjoyed! :D
12/3/20, 3:28 PM
I love the premise of Willy Wonka but I think I would have enjoyed more detail about the tortures and some more kink. These were more like foreplay. and your idea is so good, I think you could have made each of the "winners" it's own chapter with character background and maybe even combine several of the factory products: Te rubberising compound paired with immobilisation, or cum deprivation and going from monster cock to micro-penis or vice versa... So many possibilities. And the Dom who operates the factory re-shaping Charlie into his boy, then with each chapter, elevates him to his equal and partner. Wonderful and I hope you do expand it
Gasuda
12/3/20, 9:13 AM
i hope we get to read more of this one!
giveintothemusk
12/2/20, 11:40 AM
Been so long since an update! 🥺
12/2/20, 7:55 AM
Oh hey, Azure! Fancy seeing you here, man XD Yeah, I figured the story might fit in here quite well. And you did compliment me back then, that's more than enough ;3 But thank you as well for letting me write this!
Bluedude
12/2/20, 7:36 AM
lol imagine my surprised to see the story end up here! i dont think i got to thank ya for doing it back then so ill say it now. Thank you for the awesome story dude!~