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Nov 26, 2020
11/26/20, 10:44 PM
Damn that was a wild sexy ride. Thank you for it, i hope there's more.
Nov 26, 2020
11/26/20, 10:40 PM
I was raised Aesir from age 7 and I honor the old ways. Normally I would object to an Odinic sexual fantasy but Mate; what an incredible story of embodiment, possession and transformation. I'm awed at it's potency. Good on you!!!
Nov 26, 2020
11/26/20, 10:25 PM
I cant wait to see where this goes
Nov 26, 2020
11/26/20, 5:04 PM
More?...
11/24/20, 1:26 AM
just read thru all this in one sitting keep up the goid work.
11/13/20, 4:35 AM
this is hot, especially the chastity play and corruption
Anonymous
11/8/20, 9:45 PM
Decent idea, far better writing than most. Consider having them do some drinking, one of the four new guys tells a story about two others being in a game of gay chicken. The winner claims he's never been beaten More drinking, a spiral film, then group induction and suggestions. Darren or another can challenge the champion to a game of gay chicken, take it from there. Agree that talk of Alphas and Betas is off-putting. For now, I wouldn't worry about tightening and editing. Tell the story, get it out there, and do some tightening and editing later. Your writing is already well above-average. You can take some time to continue fleshing out the characters. I don't much like Ian's character right now, which means you've already built him enough to draw a reaction. Build the others as well. You're setting this up to be a slow burn, one of the more difficult genres but easily my favorite. You're writing a story, not a quick masturbation prompt.
11/4/20, 2:22 AM
such a great teaser of what's to come!
11/3/20, 7:13 AM
Just read the whole series.....I hope you are going to continue it.
Anonymous
10/31/20, 9:07 PM
thought there was gonna be more chapters?