Recent Comments

12/5/20, 8:48 PM
Thanks for the comment Jack! Glad you enjoyed that, I try to be inventive ;)
12/5/20, 8:14 PM
such a good follow up. especially loved Charlie being trapped in a jar with smelly socks!
12/5/20, 3:46 PM
@Horn Thank you! Glad you loved it! Part 2 was actually just posted today ;)
12/5/20, 10:25 AM
I LOVE THIS!!! can't wait to read more and to expand. love the idea of potions
12/4/20, 7:26 PM
@Viridian Ahaha now that would be quite a challenge XD Thank you for the comment!
12/4/20, 1:22 PM
The premise is good and the execution is fun. Plenty of potential for expansion. Consider doing the songs. :-)
12/4/20, 5:19 AM
@zimdog Thanks man! Appreciate the comment :)
12/4/20, 2:52 AM
Lots of potential for future chapters. A few minor typo issues, but easily read through. Looking forward to more.
Anonymous
12/4/20, 1:43 AM
Thanks Evan!
Evan
12/4/20, 1:28 AM
Creative use of the old classic. Great job. Congrats on your first story.