Recent Comments

12/11/20, 9:17 PM
Damn this is hot! Can't wait to see where this is going
12/11/20, 6:11 PM
nice transformation, hope the voodoo doll leads to a total racial transformation. throw in more piercings and tattoos and perhaps a mohawk for contrast. keep the good work
12/11/20, 3:14 PM
I hope he gets away... afetr some more changes, and opens a club of his own, just as Phillipe planned
Anonymous
12/10/20, 10:10 PM
This is very hot. Would like to see that the master's sadistic nature commands the naked slaves to act like apes in a cage, when he don't need them for a while, to enjoy the humiliating view :D
blankbot
12/10/20, 8:27 PM
Nicely done.
12/10/20, 7:54 PM
I liked this a lot! Love the septum piercing!
12/10/20, 4:47 PM
Great start! Looking forward to more. I hope Charlie grows more comfortable with his new situation.
Anonymous
12/10/20, 3:43 PM
excellent work!!
12/10/20, 3:36 PM
Thanks boi98229! I appreciate the feedback. Glad you enjoyed!
boi98229
12/10/20, 5:53 AM
I love the super-techie (almost magic!) toys you thought up. This is the kind of imagination i wish for every Dom, along with the fun times experimenting and the appreciative subs to help with the test runs. i did find that with everything going on (so much action) the story flashed by pretty quick with some sense of suspense, a good intellectual sense of the toys and their potential use, but rather lacking (for my typical taste at least) in erotic tension. i missed (what i typically most enjoy in a BDSM D/s story) is the slow process of seduction and shift in control. It felt a little like a Batman-Joker battle in Willie Wonka's Chocolate Factory -- a fun read! Thanks so much for sharing with us.