Recent Comments

1/2/21, 6:03 AM
thanks for this! wicked hot. what refuels your motivation? i'll help :)
1/1/21, 10:39 PM
Thank you for this great (and hot) series! Keep writing, please!
DikThik
1/1/21, 9:35 PM
Thanks, Tough. Hope you like its progression and its conclusion. Lemme know either way.
Toughluck
1/1/21, 9:34 PM
Keeping it coming!
Toughluck
1/1/21, 9:23 PM
Exceptional first chapter, and I can't wait to learn more of Charlie's fate!
1/1/21, 7:12 PM
I look forward to Levi's transformation to utterly content baby, happily pissing himself and being molested by his loving Daddy.
1/1/21, 5:25 AM
*Noam*.... I have to agree with Time here, the worldbuilding is SO sharp and effortless — the little details you add range from hilarious to unsettling to just... rich. The things that count as swearing in this odd world, the combination of strict old world tradition with new technology, the merging of faith and technology... so incredibly fun to read! The progression with Santa was also just *hot*... I'm not usually into chastity but, reducing your main character to a horny, mumbling mess who can barely form words because he wants to get off so bad? The motif of the Xmas wishes, the idea of him taking all the sin in, the societal implications of even a system like this society needing people to take on the mantle of sinners or for all those impure thoughts to *go* somewhere? Ugh. Such a good read.
12/31/20, 7:10 PM
can I suggest a prompt? what about a conservative party gathering that is turned into a gay pride rally and orgy after the sound equipment I hijacked?
Anonymous
12/31/20, 5:31 PM
The worldbuilding in this story is so succinct and sharp, and I love the religious swear expressions. My favourite part is the trial, it's so surreal and delightful. The sexy parts are also so well-written, and the little details in the scenes are really well-chosen. So good!