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Anonymous
1/21/21, 8:03 AM
I love this!!! Hope you do a puppy/animal play episode!!
1/21/21, 7:38 AM
Great premise, and I love the pictures. However, I wonder if it's trying to compress too much time into a single 5000-word chapter. We get these massive time jumps, and after each one, the narrator speaks in general terms about what's been happening to him. So the story feels less immediate than it might otherwise. Also, although the narrator tells us repeatedly that he's a devout Christian, we don't see that playing out very much in his interaction with the natives or in his struggles with his mental transformation. Just a matter of personal taste, but for me the story would have worked better if we saw the narrator being very judgmental and preachy before his abduction.
1/18/21, 6:07 AM
please please please more!!!!
1/17/21, 9:55 PM
You serie was super hot ! made me cum many times !
1/15/21, 8:09 PM
@Jjoday018 Thank you so much for your comment man! Glad you liked! I can't wait to bring you the next twisted chapter 😉
1/15/21, 7:26 PM
i freaking love this!!! i cant wait for the next twisted chapter!!
1/14/21, 6:35 PM
Thanks, abdtiresias, for the comment. Actually, I wasn't picturing the characters as having had a race change . . . only an appearance change that would fake out the brothel customers. Maybe that is a distinction without a difference, though.
1/14/21, 3:31 PM
Great story. I was excited by the description of the name changing and the obscene tattoo being engraved. I'm so excited that the main character becomes a different race and can't be identified forever, and he will never be able to dress, naked without even Loincloth... I was happy because there were so many great ideas. Thank you.
Martin
1/14/21, 8:55 AM
This second part was quite a ride! Very hot. Thanks!
Martin
1/13/21, 9:44 PM
A very hot beginning! Let's see what else you have in mind for us!