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1/24/21, 3:40 AM
Not super familiar with pup play but sounds interesting. Thanks for the comment!
1/23/21, 1:17 PM
I really enjoyed your other story here, but this one, I just couldn’t get into. I go to half way through this chapter and gave up. But to echo Hypnothrill, show me who your character is, don’t have them tell me who they are.
1/23/21, 12:27 PM
Pup play would be fun to see who is the "best in show" use a potion to turn Ryan and Victor into real dogs then paint the loser as a dog, temporarily neuter the statue with magic and the winner wears the balls as a necklace to intimidate the remaining contestants.
1/23/21, 1:04 AM
I really appreciated this! It hits one of my biggest kinks, being forced to live in a changed body.
1/22/21, 7:08 PM
Interesting suggestions guys. Thanks! Glad you are all enjoying so far and I appreciate the comments 😊👊👍
1/22/21, 4:49 PM
blankbot, I can totally see mind control in the way "Papa" chants over his head at night, and the speed in which he lost English! I imagine more stuff to your liking, to occur in the next chapter?
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1/22/21, 11:40 AM
I think a watersports round would be hot, and yeah, it's the obvious choice, but Victor
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1/22/21, 3:37 AM
great story would love to see a chapter about anal play or stretching like fisting, or something like watersports. also my vote would be for victor or ryan to leave
1/21/21, 10:58 PM
This is a well-written story. However, I was hoping for some mind control elements. Perhaps it'll be in the next chapter? Thank you.
1/21/21, 1:27 PM
Thanks, Hypnothrill, for the observations. I can see where you're coming from. I decided not to go that way, feeling I'd get too involved in the weeds, as it were, at the expense of the story.