Recent Comments

Jeen
9/3/25, 12:56 AM
Agreed that the ending is very random and tacked-on feeling for such a kinky and hot story. I guess a romantic ending is ok but you have to make it make sense as a resolution and this doesn’t. Not to mention that it throws everything kinky and hot in the bin, this is gay spiral stories not generic gay love stories

Jeen
9/3/25, 1:12 AM
@Jeen Also agreed that the romance thing feels very hollow when you realize that Josh is literally an unrepentant rapist who ends up with a lovey dovey ending as vanilla boyfriends with his unwitting victim that he hides the truth from. Not even that fictional/fantasy nonconsent isn’t ok, but that in-universe it’s treated like a bad thing when Josh tries to undo it and only kind of succeeds, but then it’s swept under the rug in the end anyways. Like why should we want them to have a happy ending together, how does Josh deserve that after what he’s done?
Aug 31, 2025
9/3/25, 1:02 AM
Tom's denial over his infection is adorable, wonder how long it will last
Anonymous
9/2/25, 8:19 PM
more please!!!
9/2/25, 6:45 AM
Hope there will be more.
9/1/25, 2:59 PM
This chapter was full of surprises! The stabbing scene was intense, but in character for each of them - Liam more rational (passive), Noah more impetuous (aggressive). As others have pointed out, we are seeing another side of Noah - a mixture of affection and possessiveness. Don't touch my toys! :laughing: The hospital scene was a new spin on the thrills and challenges of sex where you can get caught. Sex and adrenaline combined for each guy and for Noah another layer of control achieved. I'm sure his wheels are spinning!

9/1/25, 4:35 PM
@[Muscle-Flex-1](/user/show/2059714) LMAOO dont touch my toys is exactly what i was going for tbhhh
Mark
9/1/25, 4:13 PM
Nothing sexier than a guy in a thong glad this was featured throughout. Amazing series loved it from start to finish!
Aug 31, 2025
Anonymous
9/1/25, 9:15 AM
Great work as always
8/31/25, 3:36 PM
I adore this story 🥰

9/1/25, 6:33 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I sent you a forum message. Let me know if you can help.
9/1/25, 2:08 AM
Dude, this story was exceptional! Porny, over-the-top, exaggerated - but all in the _very best way!_ As mentioned above, there was a very conversational, casual style to this story that really suited it well and made it a really easy read, while still being insanely sexy! Everything from the huge dicks, to the "Latino god", to just the casualness of it all was right up my alley! If I could muster any constructive criticism, the only thing I would recommended is maybe giving it a once over and reviewing the grammar and toning that style you've developed - as sometimes I felt my eyes getting lost in the density of some of the paragraphs or action. But please don't be discouraged, I actually can't wait to see what you'll contribute next - keep up the great work! (And thank you Soren, for sending this story to me. You know exactly what I like! :kissing_heart:)