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1/22/21, 7:08 PM
Interesting suggestions guys. Thanks! Glad you are all enjoying so far and I appreciate the comments 😊👊👍
1/22/21, 4:49 PM
blankbot, I can totally see mind control in the way "Papa" chants over his head at night, and the speed in which he lost English! I imagine more stuff to your liking, to occur in the next chapter?
Anonymous
1/22/21, 11:40 AM
I think a watersports round would be hot, and yeah, it's the obvious choice, but Victor
Anonymous
1/22/21, 3:37 AM
great story would love to see a chapter about anal play or stretching like fisting, or something like watersports. also my vote would be for victor or ryan to leave
1/21/21, 10:58 PM
This is a well-written story. However, I was hoping for some mind control elements. Perhaps it'll be in the next chapter? Thank you.
1/21/21, 1:27 PM
Thanks, Hypnothrill, for the observations. I can see where you're coming from. I decided not to go that way, feeling I'd get too involved in the weeds, as it were, at the expense of the story.
1/21/21, 12:55 PM
@Horn Thank you so much! I really appreciate this comment :D
1/21/21, 12:55 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! I will have to keep that in mind. We'll see.
1/21/21, 10:23 AM
love it! you're ideas are great and excellent writing! not only a hot concept, but the story itself is well written
Anonymous
1/21/21, 8:03 AM
I love this!!! Hope you do a puppy/animal play episode!!