Recent Comments

S
2/28/21, 1:31 AM
In love with this story line, both these characters are amazing. So into seeing the battle Emit is having to go through. Cant wait for the brothers to be mindfucked to oblivion
2/27/21, 11:18 PM
Love it. love it. love it. love it. love it. 10/10 no question
2/27/21, 9:52 PM
So glad there's a new chapter already. I think your wiring is very fresh cuz you front rush things. You take your time by enjoying the mind fucking of the victim. It's not slow in a way where it gets boring the longer the story gets. And it's also not rushed where we go from 1 guy to another in a matter of chapters. I really enjoy it. And I think the best way to respond to all the comments is to send us another chapter ;)
Jack
2/27/21, 7:59 PM
I'll admit I was expecting to wait a lot longer for this particular installment, especially after your devastating two week hiatus, so imagine my surprise when I logged on this morning only to see another 7,000 word epic grace my screen. I don't want to just throw generic praise your way, so I'll say that I absolutely fucking love getting to see the different points of view between Vincent and Emit. I may be reading it wrong, but it feels like Emit is a little further along than Vincent thinks he is, and reading as a thrall voluntarily throws himself further into depravity is hot as hell. I can't wait to see the brothers get involved in this, but for now I look forward to a complete mindfuck of Emit. Weave your words, author!
2/27/21, 7:57 PM
I love my self a good revenge story. Mirrors what i have been through for the most of the time but with the possibility of the revenge i craved. Good writing sir, and good job with the story.
2/27/21, 5:33 AM
love how the dad is so turned on of his son but he's still a man's man. Can wait for him to be abused with toys 😳
Jack
2/27/21, 1:51 AM
I read this and I honestly didn't know what to say. The master once again takes cum-filled pen to paper? You're edging us harder than Vincent did to Emit? This story is 9000 words straight from my smut swirling mind? All of them at once? The only thing, the only possible thing, that I didn't like about it was the whole fucking site hasn't been replaced by your stories. Make it about 500,000 words longer and I'll stop complaining.
2/26/21, 4:05 PM
I f-ing love this. It was written amazingly and I love the idea in general. I am on the edge of my seat for the brothers to come into it
2/26/21, 6:20 AM
To me, this is your best work yet! Not because of the payoff but the writing was so well done! This is an observation not a criticism but reading more about Emits reaction to being in the lingerie from start to finish and his evolving comfort level would have been icing on the cake. Thank you for continuing this. LOVE it!
2/26/21, 3:40 AM
The story is amazingly written, can wait for what have in store!