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1/26/21, 12:45 AM
Great stuff! Hope you do a third chapter, tell us what happens to Jack/Tkan. Hope he comes back to the tribe.
1/26/21, 12:31 AM
I am delighted with this story, I have friends who have visited New Guinea and they tell me you have described it well. Love the illustrations, could use a little more detail about the events but great and can't wait t read the sequel .
1/25/21, 10:53 PM
It was fast-paced as those above have stated, but the writing and concept were great! And a very hot plot! My bit of critique is, you gave too many details at the beginning about the end. Sort of like standing in line for a movie and the people coming out of the last showing tell you how it ends. I'm fine with hinting at the ending, at the beginning, but you revealed quite a bit before the story started. Still, I thought this was very hot, got me REAL excited and horny! :-)
1/25/21, 2:29 PM
Eliminate Ryan and turn him into a urinal while stopping the others from using any other urinal and therefore having to piss down Ryan's throat.
1/25/21, 1:42 PM
I cant get over how hot and amazing your stories are. You are DEFINITELY a writer.
1/24/21, 10:06 AM
another great chapter!! i feel like it you couldve gone into more detail about the edging and events like in your other stories which make it really hot. overall great and cant wait to see whats next
Anonymous
1/24/21, 9:51 AM
excellent thanks
1/24/21, 3:40 AM
Not super familiar with pup play but sounds interesting. Thanks for the comment!
1/23/21, 1:17 PM
I really enjoyed your other story here, but this one, I just couldn’t get into. I go to half way through this chapter and gave up. But to echo Hypnothrill, show me who your character is, don’t have them tell me who they are.