Recent Comments

2/10/21, 12:50 AM
well done! please continue!
2/10/21, 12:30 AM
I really enjoyed this first chapter and look forward to where you take the story next.
2/9/21, 8:49 PM
really awsome start to the story, looking forward to the next chapter.
2/9/21, 8:34 PM
Love this. Can't wait to read more. Please continue.
nycboot
2/9/21, 8:28 PM
Interesting start. Like a "message movie" I consider this a "political story" in that the point seems to be less about sex or mind control but more about teaching tolerance of gayness. Your writing makes readers want to strongly empathize with Vince so I'm all for him screwing his dad both in mind and in body. But to keep that empathy don't make him a crazed son seeking ultimate revenge. Make his actions and thoughts just enough to make his father 1) accept gayness and 2) be a real father and support his son to the max.
2/9/21, 8:05 PM
Very well written ! The backstory and the motivation of the main character is very well established. looking forward to more chapters !
Anonymous
2/9/21, 6:22 PM
I Like the start, I hope things keep going well
boi98229
2/9/21, 6:49 AM
Nicky is still a virgin and still he is totally screwed! i understand his dilemma though, not wanting to give too much personal information about himself, and feeling so strongly the arousal, the powerful need, to obey and be dominated. i hope you decide to add to this hot story at some point! Thanks so much.
2/7/21, 1:35 PM
@matt Thanks man! The punishments are fun to write.
2/6/21, 3:38 PM
Your stories are awesome!!!! Love how you write them, and I love how your characters are punished with kinks that they might not be into but are forced to experience them! also love the chastity ties you bring in!