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2/10/21, 11:42 PM
Loving this. Please continue.
2/10/21, 10:54 PM
as for the family, make the uncle the "straight gay" archetype, which means the he is gay but without any of the stereotypchal traits, and make him hook up with someone very flamboyant, as he was nicer, and was more on the misinformed side, so something lighter was in order, for his oldest brother, make him a himbo jock and a total bottom, for the other brother, make him a cock sucker who really gets around all of them making sure the sex was safe, off course, as for the dad make him a walking camp gay stereotype, make him a safe sex slut, maybe whore him up, with the main character ending up with a good man
2/10/21, 2:26 PM
pls continue the series, let him male jay jealous, just a suggestion. Thank you
2/10/21, 5:39 AM
Cant wait to see where you bring this premise next
Jack
2/10/21, 4:57 AM
Definitely looking for more. This is a good story and I really like the writing style. I also like that you made Vince a kinky fucker. Run wild with that shit.
2/10/21, 2:43 AM
this was good. have to admit the first few paragraphs i wanted to jump in and save him
2/10/21, 1:14 AM
I love it, so much potential! The old big macho dad as a bottom and the thin son dominating... perfection, big sub small top is my jam <3 If you feel like it, you can try also to add feet, if not, its ok, I would love to read more!
2/10/21, 12:50 AM
well done! please continue!
2/10/21, 12:30 AM
I really enjoyed this first chapter and look forward to where you take the story next.
2/9/21, 8:49 PM
really awsome start to the story, looking forward to the next chapter.