Recent Comments

2/14/21, 11:03 AM
Great new chapter!
2/14/21, 10:46 AM
You sir writing a good story. The bad part is that we have to wait for another chapter. Write faster dammit 🤪
2/14/21, 10:42 AM
Love this story. I can't wait to see what he does next to his dad and brothers.
2/14/21, 10:40 AM
i woke up at 4am and thought I'd browse to see if there were any new stories, and as luck would have it my favorite one popped up! Excellent chapter! I loved reading about the father's reaction to his new programming- that was extremely hot. There were a lot of motivational nuances that really fleshed out the story. Well done!
2/14/21, 10:29 AM
No problem, sorry if my suggestions last chapter sounded like I was demanding
2/13/21, 10:21 PM
Its Okay CigarMan, the writer asked for suggestions when he posted the chapter, and I just give some, I apologise if they sounded like I was demanding
2/13/21, 10:13 PM
loving this story. really well done for a first time effort . Oh and darkblade2814, I don't want to cause a war here, but let the author write his own damn story. Your "write this, write that" comment is not only annoying, but it's an insult to the writer's vision and process. You like those elements so much, write your own story
2/13/21, 8:22 PM
I'm loving this story and can't wait to see where you take this. It's well written and hot! Keep up the good work!
giveintothemusk
2/13/21, 7:54 PM
So great. 🥰
IvorySilk
2/13/21, 5:59 AM
I forgot to leave a comment here, but I really liked this one. It's clever, the perspective you took Milo being the narrator, and his sort of blasé attitude telling the story. Really emphasised how dominated he was. The subtle seduction other commented one was also a nice touch. Kudos!