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7/27/21, 4:14 AM
The proof that I've been terribly busy these days is that until now I couldn't read well this new story you uploaded. Good as usual, buddy. I like that Charlie seem to be negligent and careless... would be bad from my side to assume he's a bit slow minded? well, he gave me that impression, and I think that's a good choice for a main character. We typically have main characters with average to high intelligence behind the mind control, and it's good to have a careless simple guy in charge to give a different flavor.

Oddballs
7/31/21, 1:25 AM
@Plymouth58 In all honesty, that's probably me myself getting through, because I have very little semblance of what highly intellectual professors such as Dover actually say in a university course lmao XD I'd be illustrating the example of the form of a professor with a speech bubble that said ("Blah blah blah, educated noise. Furthermore, blah blah fancy adjective, blah blah blah complicated Latin quote, blah blah") I'm basically winging this exactly how I've been winging Seducing A Cowboy; fetishizing a scene and having very little clue about going about this! Heheheheeeeeeee~!

8/1/21, 5:36 AM
@Oddballs Ohhh! so the merit is double for you then, buddy! 'Seducing A Cowboy' gives me the impression that you know many things about the life in a ranch or about cowboys, because it have many details that really immerse me into that world. Man, you're truly talented!

Oddballs
8/1/21, 5:45 AM
@Plymouth58 Dude. Not. At. All. I'm such a dunce when it comes to history or even research, when writing Seducing A Cowboy, I am solely operating on the things I see from Back To The Future 3, Blazing Saddles, watching my sister play Red Dead Redemption 2, and an episode of Adam Ruins Everything about the Old West. I almost want to say I'm pulling all of it out of my ass! I'm FAR from being any kind of expert about the themes I currently write, I'm just horning up specific ideas and people and having to ignore a boner on my way to work X3

8/1/21, 6:21 AM
@Oddballs Oh, man, then you're the living proof that that aphorism of "fake it till you make it" really can bring good results! Ha, ha, ha! By the way, I just finished chapter 2 of this new series, and I must say now I have to ignore my boner on my way to work too! XD it's exquisitely horny, buddy.

Oddballs
8/1/21, 6:25 AM
@Plymouth58 Awww, would've liked a comment of what you thought annotation-wise like you do with your other comments. But that's just me being needy and greedy for attention X3 I'm glad you liked it though and I hope you continue to enjoy it, I am looking forward to possibly elaborating it further!
Geo
4/15/21, 5:33 AM
That chapter was awesome. You're really, really good at sex scenes and describing the guys as being confused by the reprogramming. That part is always a highlight. I especially love the parts with the brothers struggling against it and their homophobia contrasting with their new feelings. I feel like this story keeps getting better and better. I'm still really intrigued by Vince's plans for Erik's cop uniform. I can't help but hope that Vince makes Erik's pants assless and has him go out in public thinking they aren't, or better yet have the uniform's seams strategically altered to rip or fall apart in public. Especially if Vince has Erik convinced that he wants to wear the same kind of thongs/panties that Emit is now a fan of, but not brainwashed enough to not feel ashamed of the fact. I would love if Erik got a little public humiliation as retribution for how he treated Vince, it'd be poetic justice if he got ripped on by his co-workers for wearing slutty women's underwear; since he was such a horrible bully to Vince. I feel like his tough guy reputation needs to be taken down a peg and that seems like it'd be a fitting punishment for someone who was probably a bully to more than just Vince (he does treat women like whores, him getting treated like one would feel right).

Blackjinx123
4/16/21, 4:10 AM
@Geo thank you so much for your kind words! i'm so happy you enjoyed it! your suggestions already coincide with a few things i have planned for the bully brothers, i wont specify which though. gotta keep you guessing so you come back for more ;)

7/4/21, 12:52 PM
Erik should have a lot of humiliation in his cop uniform. When Erik has to reprimand a group of heavily tattooed thugs he suddenly starts behaving as the cop slut he wants to be for them. Imagine what they will do to him@Blackjinx123

Geo
7/13/21, 4:11 AM
@uniform53 Yes! I'd love to see that happen! Erik so deserves it, I think it'd be fun to see him in humiliating situations and getting taken advantage of. I really hope that @Blackjinx123 will continue the story, I'm always checking to see if this particular story updates cause it's so well-written.

Blackjinx123
8/1/21, 3:21 AM
@Geo thanks so much! a new chapter will be posted soon! i hope you enjoy!
Anonymous
5/28/21, 10:38 AM
I love this!!! I can't wait for the next one

Blackjinx123
8/1/21, 3:20 AM
@Anonymous thank you!
4/25/21, 12:39 AM
Best fuck scene I have ever read!!

Blackjinx123
8/1/21, 3:19 AM
@PupScout thank you so much! next chapter will be up shortly, heres hoping you enjoy it just as much!
7/31/21, 9:20 PM
well, I don't know how things will go, I hope to see more people being messed, like, the coach of the football team being married with the theater teacher, with the coach being the submissive bottom
7/31/21, 6:15 PM
hotttt
7/30/21, 1:55 AM
Such wonderful world building and good quality writing. I really cannot wait to see more! Exemplary!

7/30/21, 2:02 AM
@Jayden Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement! We're looking forward to sharing more with you!
Doug
7/28/21, 1:44 PM
How about a Diamond tier and then a Platinum tier?
7/27/21, 6:25 AM
hotttt. hope more is to come. keep it up.

7/27/21, 2:45 PM
@Jonanator Thank you! There's definitely more to come! Love hearing that you're enjoying it!

7/27/21, 10:34 PM
@time.to.occur yeah, it is an amazing story. the way it's going so far. Keep it up.
7/27/21, 8:35 AM
What a cool world you've created! This was hot. Can't wait

7/27/21, 2:44 PM
@GiveInToTheMusk Thank you so much! definitely standing on the shoulders of giants there with a bit of our own twist! Really appreciate the encouragement!