Recent Comments

3/3/21, 7:58 PM
I like what you have written so far, so keep on doing what you are doing! Incest is wincest. Thanks again for the great story!
3/3/21, 2:31 AM
the older brother likes being a cop. make him a police dog pup that gaurds the family.
3/3/21, 1:54 AM
I'd love for the brothers to retain all of their morals. Reluctant pleasure and all that. Make them desire Vincent AND feel guilty and disgusted by themselves, just like Emit was in the shower scene.
3/2/21, 10:31 PM
Having Emit's army buddies and Erik's patrol partner to the mix would be fun. Doesn't need a detailed explaination on how they've been reprogrammed; just paragraph outlining would be fine for side characters.
Lakritz24
3/2/21, 8:21 PM
It sounds like I have inspiried it in my youth.
3/2/21, 5:59 PM
Love how the dad is coming along he is total slut for his son; I can’t wait to read what will his mind become after he gets finally fucked. About what to do with the brother; dumb them down! The older one can just be loving himbo for his brother and the middle bro must become plain stupid, so much that instead of programming him he is so gullible for his family that they just have to say something and he will do/believe it
Rubber_Lover14
3/2/21, 11:02 AM
Ooo, how about making one of the older brothers obsessed with musk? Like licking armpits and feet, and sockgagging him and all that. But have it where his mind still hates it but his body loves it
Sam
3/2/21, 10:15 AM
Suggestions: i think the older brother should become a dumb body builder that desperately needs to show his body at all times and that cant stand the thought of not having a fist in him at all times. the younger brother should be turned into a sissy pothead with a piss kink and needs to drink a bottle of his daddies piss from him everyday just to feel satisfied
Jack
3/2/21, 7:40 AM
You're becoming one of the most popular authors on this site and you're asking us for suggestions? If I could have written a story like this one, I would have, man. I have things that I like, things that get the cum flowing, but I'm not going to sit here and pretend that I have your talent. Your writing stands on its own, and wherever you decide to take things with the brothers will have us begging for more, just like we do every time one of your stories comes out. Don't feel obligated to us like that. You're doing a good job! Of course, I'll be open about the stuff that does get me horny. Obviously, the way you're going in this series is spot on and I've loved every word of it, but there's always been something missing from this site and I wonder if you're the author to finally make it happen. If it doesn't quite fit with your vision of these characters, don't worry. I certainly won't hold it against you! So few of this site's characters who control enemies, friends, family, etc. experience the pleasure of bottoming. I assume it's because being the bottom in a gay relationship is generally seen as weaker, but I don't see it like that. I'd love to finally see a story where the controller bottoms. They get to feel the wonderful pleasure that comes from it, as well as showing their thrall that even in what is considered the most alpha of positions, they're still slaves. You're a good writer. Your flow and character development are done extremely well. You've earned your top spot here, as well as the right to write what comes to you. Believe in your writing. Take confidence from our responses. You really are doing good! I know it's weird to say on a porn story site like this, but sometimes self-esteem boosts come from unexpected places.
Anonymous
3/2/21, 7:05 AM
I'm always down for a good big strong alpha male into a loving playful pup. Then there is also a classic himbo, cant go wrong there. I also really like the idea of one of the brothers, or dad even, looking like a total leather dom but is really a devoted sub.